
✎作文范文
growing urban population and declining rural population
from the graph, we can see that the urban population was growing and the rural population was declining from 1990 to 2026. the number of the urban population rose from 300 million in 1990 to about 460 million in 2000, and to about 685 million in 2026, while the rural population decreased from about 820 million in 1990 to 800 million in 2000 and to about 690 million in 2026. its obvious that in the past two decades, the urban area witnessed a steady growth, but in the latter decade, the rural population had a remarkable decline.
there are two reasons for this phenomenon. on one hand, the economic boom led to the regular improvement of people’s living standard, and further resulted in a steady growing urban population. on the other hand, from 2000, the countryside urbanization oriented by the government gave rise to a conspicuously declining rural population.
in conclusion, based on the above analysis, the urban population will be growing, while the rural population will continue to drop in the future.
点评:本次考研英语二大作文是图表作文,这也是历年大作文的典型题目之一。针对图表作文,我们一般采用三段式来谋篇布局, 第一段概述图表的信息,指出变化的趋势和不同,第二段分析造成这一趋势以及变化不同的原因,第三段则根据以上分析展望未来的变化。在写作过程中注意衔接词的使用以及同义词的搭配使用,使文章更加出彩。
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型:说明文、图表作文
适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
稳步增长、显著下降、经济腾飞、城乡变迁
【形容词】
持续的、稳定的、显著的、迅猛的、典型的、出彩的、明显的、规律性的
【好词好句】
1. “the urban population was growing and the rural population was declining from 1990 to 2026”
2. “the urban area witnessed a steady growth, but in the latter decade, the rural population had a remarkable decline”
3. “the countryside urbanization oriented by the government gave rise to a conspicuously declining rural population”
【修辞手法】
比喻:将城乡人口变化比作“此消彼长的潮汐”,暗含动态平衡与时代律动
排比:未形成严格三句及以上结构的排比,但“from 1990 to 2026…from 300 million…to about 460 million…to about 685 million”呈现数据递进式罗列,具节奏感
【文字校对】
• "its obvious"应为"it's obvious"
• "the number of the urban population rose"中冠词冗余,宜删去"the"
• "countryside urbanization"搭配欠妥,规范表达为"rural urbanization"或"urbanization of rural areas"
【写作亮点】
✓ 数据引述精准,时间轴与数量级清晰对应
✓ 原因分析紧扣宏观政策与经济发展双维度
✓ 段落功能明确,严格遵循图表作文经典三段式逻辑
✓ 衔接自然,“on one hand…on the other hand…in conclusion”体现严密论证层次