✎作文范文
dear editor,
i’m a sincere reader of your newspaper and i like your discussion of the social problems. now i would like to give some opinions of myself about the “white pollution”.
as we know, regulation was made to solve the problem in june 1st of 2026. the use of plastic bags for free was restricted in the supermarket and many other shops. at the beginning, it was carried on well, but now i find plastic bags are used in some small shops for free or with no pay.
i am writing to inform you that we should solve this problem soon with the help of your newspaper. you could make some investigations about it and write some reports of it, so as to appeal to all the people’s attention of our society. sincerely,
li ming
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作文类型：应用文、书信、议论文
适合年级：初中三年级、高中一年级、高中二年级
【成语使用】
无
【形容词】
sincere、social、white、free、small
【好词好句】
1. “i’m a sincere reader of your newspaper and i like your discussion of the social problems.”
2. “the use of plastic bags for free was restricted in the supermarket and many other shops.”
3. “you could make some investigations about it and write some reports of it, so as to appeal to all the people’s attention of our society.”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "2026"应为"2008"
• "with no pay"应为"for little or no charge"
• "attention of our society"应为"attention across our society"
【写作亮点】
✓ 格式规范，具备完整英文书信结构（称呼、正文、落款）
✓ 逻辑清晰，问题提出—现状描述—建议呼吁层层递进
✓ 语言得体，语气诚恳而有分寸，符合读者来信身份
✓ 主题聚焦，紧扣“白色污染”治理实效展开，具现实关切