✎作文范文
题目：should parents send their kids to art classes?
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班； 1、对这种做法有人表示支持， 2、有人并不赞成； every coin has two sides. as far as i am concerned, i think children’s interests should be taken into careful consideration before being sent to art classes. children should be given enough freedom to develop by themselves. whether parents should send their kids to art classes, it depends.
should parents send their kids to art classes?
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：议论文、英文写作、话题讨论
适合年级：初中三年级、高中一年级、高中二年级
【成语使用】
每枚硬币都有两面
【形容词】
各种、足够、认真、不同、自由
【好词好句】
1. every coin has two sides.
2. children’s interests should be taken into careful consideration before being sent to art classes.
3. children should be given enough freedom to develop by themselves.
【修辞手法】
比喻：every coin has two sides，以硬币两面喻指事物的双重性，形象揭示观点的辩证本质
【文字校对】
• "every coin has two sides"应为"every coin has two sides"
• "should parents send their kids to art classes?"应为"should parents send their kids to art classes?"
• "1、对这种做法有人表示支持， 2、有人并不赞成；"应为"1. 对这种做法有人表示支持；2. 有人并不赞成。"
【写作亮点】
✓ 观点明确，立场清晰，开篇即亮明“以儿童兴趣为先”的核心主张
✓ 善用英文谚语增强思辨张力，中英结合自然得体
✓ 句式富有变化，包含条件状语从句、被动语态与主语从句等多种结构
✓ 结尾句“whether parents should send their kids to art classes, it depends.”以开放式收束，余味简练
