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whenever a college student is asked, what are you going to do this summer vacation? the most probable answer might be i am going to have a travel. it sounds that college students are fond of travelling. why? because travel has numerous advantages.
first of all, travel can widen our knowledge of geography, the knowledge of customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries. secondly, we can make friends and practise a foreign language through travelling. finally, travel is the best way of pastime. we can enjoy eating various food and seeing beautiful sceneries.
in a word, we can benefit from travel in more than one way. it is worth spending the time.
不管你什么时候问一个大学生这样一个问题：“今年暑假你要做什么?”他很可能这样回答：“我要去旅游.”听起来大学生们是喜欢旅游的.为什么呢? 因为旅游有许多好处.
首先,旅游可以扩大我们的地理知识以及扩大我们对不同地区不同国家的风俗、文化和生活方式方面的知识.其次,通过旅游我们可以交朋友、练外语.最后,旅游是消遣的方法,我们可以享受各种食品,观看美丽景色.
一句话,旅游的好处不止一个方面,花些时间是值得的.
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：议论文、双语对照作文
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
各式各样、各式各样、美丽景色
【形容词】
各种、不同、美丽、外国、不同、有趣、丰富、愉快
【好词好句】
1. travel can widen our knowledge of geography, the knowledge of customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries.
2. travel is the best way of pastime.
3. 旅游可以扩大我们的地理知识以及扩大我们对不同地区不同国家的风俗、文化和生活方式方面的知识。
【修辞手法】
比喻：将“travel”比作“the best way of pastime”，突出其消遣价值
【文字校对】
• "pastime"应为"pastime"
• "widen our knowledge of geography, the knowledge of customs..."存在重复赘述，宜精简为"widen our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles..."
• "it sounds that college students are fond of travelling"中"it sounds that"搭配生硬，宜改为"it seems that"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语结构清晰，便于对照理解
✓ 段落逻辑分明，采用"first of all...secondly...finally..."递进式论证
✓ 中英文内容基本对应，语义传达准确
✓ 结尾简洁有力，以"in a word"收束，呼应开头
