can money buy happiness英语作文

【导语】can money buy happiness英语作文,中英文双语对照呈现,体现跨文化表达意识,观点辩证清晰,兼顾正反两面并落脚于主体性思考。

can money buy happiness英语作文

作文范文

主题: 价值观、善恶之辨、工具理性、人性本质、道德选择

different people have diffhrent views on money. it is held that money is the source of happiness. but it is also held that money is the root of evil.

those who hold the first opinion think that with money one can enjoy everything lu_urious in the world; one can eat delicacies and drink good wine, can buy a lu_urious house or car, and can travel around the world. in contrast, those who hold the second view think that with money some people visit prostitutes and abuse drug, others bribe government officials, manipulate an election or the parliament, even form terrorist organizations and launch unjust wars.

in my opinion, money is something but not everything. not every rich person is happy, nor is every poor person unhappy. besides, i think money itself is neither good nor bad. it is the person who uses money that can be regarded as good or bad. money can be used to build a country but it can also be used to destroy a country. therefore, money itself has nothing to do with happiness or evil.

不同的人有不同的意见的钱。认为金钱幸福的源泉。但也有认为金钱是邪恶的根源。

持第一种观点的人认为,有钱人可以享受世界上所有的奢侈,一个人可以吃美食,喝好的酒,可以买一个豪华的房子或汽车,可以周游世界。相比之下,持“二看”的认为,有一些人访问卖_女和滥用毒品,其他人贿赂政府官员,操纵选举或议会,甚至形成恐怖组织,发动不公正的战争。

在我看来,金钱是东西,但不是一切。不是每个富人都是幸福的,也不是每个穷人都不开心。此外,我觉得钱本身既不好也不坏。是一个人用金钱可以被认为是好的或坏的。钱可以用来建立一个国家,但它也可以用来摧毁一个国家。因此,金钱本身与幸福或邪恶无关。

精选读者点评

钱是工具,不是判官,你这句话让我划了三道线!后半段说“用钱的人才分好坏”,比前头那些例子还亮。平心而论“lu_urious”拼错两次,“卖_女”中间的横线也得补上字呀。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:议论文、对比论证、哲理思辨

适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级

【成语使用】

根深蒂固、周游世界、吃喝玩乐、操纵选举、不公正、恐怖组织

【形容词】

奢华、美味、豪华、不公正、邪恶、幸福、贫穷、富有

【好词好句】

1. “金钱是东西,但不是一切。”

2. “钱本身既不好也不坏,是使用它的人可以被视为好或坏。”

3. “金钱可以用来建立一个国家,但它也可以用来摧毁一个国家。”

4. “不是每个富人都是幸福的,也不是每个穷人都不开心。”

【修辞手法】

比喻:[“金钱是幸福的源泉”“金钱是邪恶的根源”,以“源泉”“根源”作喻,形象化抽象概念]

排比:[“可以吃美食,喝好的酒,可以买一个豪华的房子或汽车,可以周游世界”,三组“可以……”构成排比,增强语势]

【文字校对】

• "diffhrent"应为"different"

• "lu_urious"应为"luxurious"

• "abuse drug"应为"abuse drugs"

• "visit prostitutes"宜改为"engage in prostitution"(语境中更准确)

• "different people have diffhrent views on money."存在拼写错误与语法瑕疵,应为"different people have different views on money."

• "it is held that..."重复结构单调,可优化句式多样性

【写作亮点】

✓ 中英文双语对照呈现,体现跨文化表达意识

✓ 观点辩证清晰,兼顾正反两面并落脚于主体性思考

✓ 逻辑链条完整:现象罗列→对比分析→自我立场→本质升华

✓ 结尾收束有力,以“金钱本身与幸福或邪恶无关”回归价值中立立场

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