✎作文范文
hobbies and interests
习惯和兴趣
from monday until friday most people ar e busy working or studying , but in the evenings and on weekends they a re f ree to rela_ and enjoy themselves . some wa tch television or go to the movies ; othe rs pa r ticipate in sports . it depends on individual inte rests . there ar e many dif fe rent ways to spend our spar e time .
almost everyone has some kind of hobby . it may be anything from collecting stamps to making model airplanes . some hobbies a re wor th a lot of money; othe rs ar e valuable only to their owners .
i know a man who has a coin collection wor th several thou sand yuan . a short time ago he bought a r are ten-yuan piece wor th 250 yuan . he was very happy about the purchase and thought the price was reasonable . on the other hand , my son collects match bo_es . he has almost 600 of them but i doubt if they are wor th any money . however , to my son they a re e_t remely valuable . nothing makes him happier than to find a new match-bo_ for his collection .
that’s what a hobby means , i guess . it is something we like to do in our spa re time simply for the fun of it . the valuein money is not import ant , but the pleasure it gives us is .
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作文类型：说明文、议论文
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
无可厚非、物有所值
【形容词】
珍贵、稀有、合理、快乐、宝贵、单纯、真正、丰富
【好词好句】
1. it is something we like to do in our spare time simply for the fun of it.
2. the value in money is not important, but the pleasure it gives us is.
3. nothing makes him happier than to find a new match-box for his collection.
【修辞手法】
比喻：将爱好比作“spare time simply for the fun of it”，凸显其纯粹性与本真意义
【文字校对】
• "ar e" 应为 "are"
• "f ree" 应为 "free"
• "rela_" 应为 "relax"
• "wa tch" 应为 "watch"
• "pa r ticipate" 应为 "participate"
• "dif fe rent" 应为 "different"
• "wor th" 应为 "worth"
• "e_t remely" 应为 "extremely"
• "spa re" 应为 "spare"
• "match bo_es" 应为 "match-boxes"
• "bo_" 应为 "box"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语标题自然呈现，体现语言学习情境
✓ 通过对比收藏硬币与火柴盒两个实例，具象化阐释爱好的本质
✓ 主题句清晰有力，结尾段凝练升华，逻辑闭环
✓ 语言平实而富有温度，以“pleasure”为情感锚点贯穿始终