✎作文范文
in the united states， the fourth thursday in november is called thanksgiving day.
on that day， americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed during the ksgiving day is usually a family day. people always celebrate with big dinners and happy reunions. pumpkin pie and indian pudding are traditional thanksgiving desserts.
relatives from other cities， students who have been away at school， and many other americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday at home.
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作文类型：说明文、文化介绍
【成语使用】
【形容词】
traditional、happy、long、big、other
【好词好句】
1. on that day, americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed during the year.
2. thanksgiving day is usually a family day.
3. relatives from other cities, students who have been away at school, and many other americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday at home.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "ksgiving"应为"thanksgiving"
• "in the united states"应为"in the united states"
• "on that day，"应为"on that day,"（标点规范）
• "pumpkin pie and indian pudding"中"indian"应为"indian"
【写作亮点】
✓ 信息清晰，时间、地点、人物、活动要素完整
✓ 句式简洁自然，主干明确，符合说明文语体特征
✓ 通过具体食物（pumpkin pie、indian pudding）和人群（relatives、students）增强画面感与真实感
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