✎作文范文
主题：
友谊、成长、学习、陪伴
my good friend
i have a good friend named zhi meng.she is a gril, because she is eleven years old , i am ten years old ,so she is older than me.she is good at math.she often helps me with math . i am good at english ,i sometimes help her in english class . we help each other. in pe class, we play ping-pong togegher .
we are good friends .
精选读者点评
zhi meng这名字写得真工整！“togegher”少了个r，下次拼写前读两遍哈～
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：记叙文、写人作文
【形容词】
good、eleven、ten、older、good、sometimes
【好词好句】
1. she is good at math.
2. we help each other.
3. in pe class, we play ping-pong together.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "gril"应为"girl"
• "togegher"应为"together"
【写作亮点】
✓ 用简单句式清晰交代人物关系与年龄对比
✓ 通过学科互助体现友谊的平等与温暖
✓ 以具体活动（ping-pong）增强画面感和生活气息
