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友情、成长、个性、健康、自我认知
英语作文 my friend小学生
this is my friend. his name is tom. he has two big eyes and a small nose. he has a big mouth and two small ears. he likes eating beef, chicken, hamburger, pizza, pork and chinese cabbage. he is good at playing football and he is good at ru
this is my friend. his name is tom. he has two big eyes and a small nose. he has a big mouth and two small ears. he likes eating beef, chicken, hamburger, pizza, pork and chinese cabbage. he is good at playing football and he is good at running. tom runs faster than me.
精选读者点评
tom的眼睛鼻子嘴巴耳朵都写全啦！略显“he is good at ru”后面是不是漏字了！
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：写人、记叙文
【形容词】
big、small、big、small、good、fast
【好词好句】
1. he has two big eyes and a small nose.
2. tom runs faster than me.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "ru"应为"running"
【写作亮点】
✓ 人物外貌描写结构清晰，按从上到下的顺序展开
✓ 动作能力对比自然，体现朋友特点
✓ 句式简洁重复中见变化，符合初学英语写作的认知规律
