✎作文范文
in my school,there are lots of students.i can play with my friends every day , that’s very good. i like studying english,but i can’t study very well. my achievement is not stabilize.i like pe. i can run very fast.本篇文章来自资料管理下载。 i nearly take part in the match of every running .this match our class won the first.i’m very happy.i don’t like studying chinese. i hate it. it’s too difficult for me .
在我的学校里有很多学生，我可以每天和我的朋友们玩，那是很好的。我喜欢学习英语，但我不能很好地学习。本篇文章来自资料管理下载。我的成就是不稳定的，我喜欢体育。我可以跑得很快。我几乎参加比赛，这场比赛我们班赢了第一，我很高兴，我不喜欢学习中文。我讨厌它。对我来说太难了。
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作文类型：记叙文、双语对照作文
【成语使用】
【形容词】
很好、很快、高兴、困难、不稳定、难
【好词好句】
1. i can run very fast.
2. this match our class won the first.
3. i don’t like studying chinese. i hate it.
4. my achievement is not stabilize.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "in my school"应为"in my school"
• "i can play"应为"i can play"
• "that’s very good"应为"that’s very good"
• "i like studying english"应为"i like studying english"
• "my achievement is not stabilize"应为"my achievement is not stable"
• "i nearly take part in the match of every running"应为"i take part in almost every running race"
• "this match our class won the first"应为"in this match, our class won first place"
• "i don’t like studying chinese. i hate it. it’s too difficult for me"应为"i don’t like studying chinese. i hate it. it’s too difficult for me."
【写作亮点】
✓ 真实表达个人学习体验与情感倾向
✓ 中英文对照呈现，体现双语表达意识
✓ 以具体事例支撑观点（如跑步比赛获奖）
✓ 句式简洁，符合初学者语言发展阶段特点