✎作文范文
my friend and i both are from china. my friend is short, handsome, honest and funny. his father is soldier, he is about thirty-eight, his mother is a housewife, she is little heavy.
his likes play the piano. i would like play the piano. he doesn’t like study, he likes play. he and i both are good friend, we often play basketball together. i like writing now, but my friend doesn’t like writing. my study is hard-working and i am very kind. i have some books and like to read books.
my friend and i both are good friend!
我和我的朋友都来自中国。我的朋友是短，英俊，诚实和有趣。他父亲是军人，他大约三十八岁，母亲是一位家庭主妇，她很小。
他喜欢弹钢琴。我想弹钢琴。他不喜欢学习，他喜欢玩。他和我都是好朋友，我们经常一起打篮球。我喜欢写，但我的朋友不喜欢写。我的学习很努力，我很善良。我有一些书，喜欢读书。
我的朋友和我都是好朋友！
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：记叙文、双语对照作文
【形容词】
短、英俊、诚实、有趣、善良、努力、沉重、可爱
【好词好句】
1. 他和我都是好朋友，我们经常一起打篮球。
2. 我喜欢写，但我的朋友不喜欢写。
3. 我的学习很努力，我很善良。
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "short"应为"个子不高"或"身材矮小"
• "little heavy"应为"有点胖"
• "his likes play the piano"应为"he likes playing the piano"
• "i would like play the piano"应为"i would like to play the piano"
• "he doesn’t like study, he likes play"应为"he doesn’t like studying; he likes playing"
• "my study is hard-working"应为"i am hard-working in my studies"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英文逐段对照，体现双语表达意识
✓ 人物特征描写简洁清晰，个性鲜明
✓ 日常活动描写真实自然，富有生活气息
✓ 情感真挚，突出友谊主题
