✎作文范文
when i was small, my mother told me not to waste the food, so i cultivate the behavior of eating up the food. when i go out to eat, i will buy the food that is suitable for me, unlike other kids, they will buy as much as they want, and they can’t eat up, throwing away the food. but i will make sure i can eat up the food.
译文：当我很小的时候，我的妈妈告诉我不要浪费食物，因此我养成了吃完食物的习惯。当我在外面吃东西的时候，我会买适合自己的东西，不像其他的孩子，他们会买很多想要的东西，无法吃完，最后把食物扔掉了，但是我会买确保自己吃完的事物。
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作文类型：记叙文、说明文
【成语使用】
【形容词】
合适的、想要的、无法的、确保的、吃完的
【好词好句】
1. “when i was small, my mother told me not to waste the food”
2. “i cultivate the behavior of eating up the food”
3. “unlike other kids, they will buy as much as they want, and they can’t eat up, throwing away the food”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "eat up the food"应为"finish my food"
• "buy the food that is suitable for me"应为"order only what i can finish"
• "buy ensure i can eat up the food"应为"choose portions i can finish"
• "the food that is suitable for me"语义模糊，宜改为"an appropriate amount"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以亲身经历切入，真实自然
✓ 中英对照呈现，体现双语表达意识
✓ 主题聚焦节约粮食，立意清晰
✓ 句式结构基本完整，逻辑连贯
