✎作文范文
i am in no.2 middle school. i love my school . there are more than 1,500 students in our school. we have math, english, chinese, music, art ,p.e and so on. our teachers are friendly to us . although they are strict with us on all subjects, we love them very much. in class, they teach us knowledges, after class, they often play games with us. such as football, ping-pong, volleyball.
i usually join art club or sports club after school. i think i am happy every day in the school. so i love it.
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作文类型：记叙文、写人、写景
适合年级：初中一年级、初中二年级
【形容词】
friendly、strict、happy、more、such
【好词好句】
1. "although they are strict with us on all subjects, we love them very much."
2. "in class, they teach us knowledges, after class, they often play games with us."
3. "i think i am happy every day in the school."
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "knowledges"应为"knowledge"
• "no.2"应为"no. 2"
• "p.e"应为"p.e."
• "art ,p.e"应为"art, p.e."
【写作亮点】
✓ 以第一人称真实表达校园生活体验
✓ 句式长短结合，自然呈现师生互动场景
✓ 用"although"引导让步状语从句体现思维层次
✓ 结尾简洁有力，情感真挚收束全文
