smoking and health

【导语】高一英语作文翻译:smoking and health,中英双语对照结构清晰,便于理解与传播,多次使用“不仅……而且……”句式强化逻辑层次。

smoking and health

作文范文

主题: 生命安全、社会责任、公共卫生、青少年教育、文明习惯

today smoking is a widespread habit ali over the world. not only the old, the youth, but also middle school students have been engaged in smoking. many of them think that smoking is asmart symbol.

however, smoking is harmful to ones ,health. it contributes a lot of lung cancer, from which many people have died in the past years. it can also cause many other diseases. in a word, if you smoke, you do have a much greater chance of losing your health. furthermore, scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also a threat to public health, especially to women and children.

therefore, many countries have made laws forbidding smokers to smoke m public places such as cinemas, stations, hospitals, and so on giveup smoking! if you don smoke, don start. give upsmoking for the sake of your health, for the sake of your family, and for the sake of the whole world.

今天,吸烟是世界上普遍存在的一种习惯。不仅是老年人,年轻人,也有中学生一直在吸烟。他们中的许多人认为吸烟是一种潇洒的象征。

然而,吸烟有害健康,健康。在过去的几年中,有很多人死于肺癌,这对很多人都有帮助。它还可以引起许多其他疾病。一句话,如果你吸烟,你有一个更大的机会失去你的健康。此外,科学研究表明,吸烟不仅对吸烟者本身有害,而且对公共健康,特别是对妇女和儿童的健康构成威胁。

因此,许多国家都制定了法律禁止吸烟的公共场所如电_,车站,医院等地吸烟!如果你不抽烟,不要开始。戒烟吧,为了你的健康,为了你的家庭,和为了整个世界。

精选读者点评

这个“潇洒的象征”措辞精巧!可后文没接住,为啥中学生会觉得潇洒?谁影响的?哪次看见同学掏烟盒时你心跳加速了?留个空白,下次补上细节就活了。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:议论文、应用文

适合年级:初三、高一、高二

【成语使用】

潇洒自如、家喻户晓、危害无穷、刻不容缓、迫在眉睫、众所周知

【形容词】

普遍、有害、严重、巨大、公共、科学、广泛、重要

【好词好句】

1. 吸烟不仅对吸烟者本身有害,而且对公共健康,特别是对妇女和儿童的健康构成威胁。

2. 给予戒烟!如果你不抽烟,不要开始。

3. 为了你的健康,为了你的家庭,和为了整个世界。

【修辞手法】

比喻:将“吸烟”比作“威胁”,凸显其隐蔽而广泛的危害性

排比:“为了你的健康,为了你的家庭,和为了整个世界”构成三层递进式排比

【文字校对】

• "ali over"应为"all over"

• "ones ,health"应为"one's health"

• "m public places"应为"in public places"

• "giveup smoking"应为"give up smoking"

• "don smoke"应为"don't smoke"

• "don start"应为"don't start"

• "电_"应为"电影院"

【写作亮点】

✓ 中英双语对照结构清晰,便于理解与传播

✓ 多次使用“不仅……而且……”句式强化逻辑层次

✓ 呼吁性结尾富有感染力,情感真挚有温度

✓ 紧扣现实问题,体现社会责任意识

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