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关于节约用电的初中英语作文
first, we mustn turnon more lights than we need . then, we must turn fans off when we leave a room. ne_t, we must close the fridge or freezer after we have taken something out. we mustn switch off the lights when students are the last to leave the classroom. after that, we mustn leave the kettle on unattended. finally,we must close all the windows when we are using the air conditioner.
if everyone can do these,i think we can save electricity.
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作文类型：应用文、说明文、倡议类
适合年级：初中一年级、初中二年级
【文字校对】
• "we mustn turnon"应为"we must not turn on"
• "ne_t"应为"next"
• "we mustn switch off"应为"we must not switch off"
• "we mustn leave"应为"we must not leave"
【写作亮点】
✓ 条理清晰，采用first/then/next/after that/finally逻辑链组织内容
✓ 聚焦生活细节，选取教室、厨房、寝室等真实用电场景
✓ 人称统一，以“we”贯穿全文，增强集体行动感
✓ 结尾简洁有力，用条件句收束，呼应主题