✎作文范文
以吸烟为题初中英语作文
it’s well known that smoking is bad for our health. it does much harm to our lung. smoking too much is very easy to get cancer, which is very terrible. besides, smoking also do harm to people’s teeth. those people always smoke will demage their teeth and their teeth are always yellow. that makes others feel sick. the last but not least, the people smoke the passive smoking are tend to get sick. they have do nothing wrong,but stand beside those smoking people. it’s unfair. so, in order to the health of everyone, please stop smoking.
众所周知，吸烟有害健康。它会损害我们的肺。吸烟太多的人很容易得癌症，那是很可怕的。此外，吸烟还危害人们的牙齿。那些人总是吸烟的人会损害他们的牙齿而且牙齿都是黄色的。让人感到恶心。最后但并非最不重要的，吸二手烟也容易生病。他们什么都没有做错，只是站在那些抽烟的人的旁边。这太不公平了。所以，为了大家的健康，请戒烟。
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：英语应用文、说明文
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级
【文字校对】
• "do harm"应为"does harm"
• "demage"应为"damage"
• "are tend to get sick"应为"are likely to get sick"
• "they have do nothing wrong"应为"they have done nothing wrong"
• "in order to the health"应为"in order to protect the health"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英文对照结构清晰，便于理解与学习
✓ 能围绕核心论点“吸烟有害”展开多角度阐述
✓ 使用了“besides”“the last but not least”等逻辑连接词，层次分明
✓ 中文部分语言通顺，准确传达英文原意