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我崇拜的偶像初一英语作文
i like yao ming very much who is the idol i like most. i like playing basketball and in my opinion, he is the best basketball player inchina. when he started to play basketball in nba, i was so e_cited that i saw the news about him everyday. when he performed well, i was really happy for him. when he did not, i hoped he could rearrange himself and do well in the ne_t game. what’s more, his personalities attract me as well. he is kind-hearted and humorous. he always smiles and is kind to very body, even his opponents. although he does not play basketball anymore, i still like him. i hope he can do well in other fields as well.
我很喜欢姚明,他是我最喜欢的偶像。我喜欢打篮球,在我看来他是中国秀的篮球运动员。当他开始去nba打篮球的时候我非常激动,因为我可以每天都可以看到有关他的消息了。当他表现优异的时候我真的为他感到高兴,当他表现得不好的时候我希望他能够调整好自己在下一场比赛中好好表现。另外,他的性格同样吸引着我。他非常热心和幽默,总是面带微笑,对每个人都很友好,甚至对是自己的对手。虽然他不再打篮球了,我仍然很喜欢他。我希望他在其他领域也能做得很好。
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作文类型:记叙文、写人作文、英语作文
适合年级:初中一年级、初中二年级
【成语使用】
面带微笑、表现优异、调整自己、做得很好
【形容词】
激动、优秀、热心、幽默、友好、优异、高兴、出色
【好词好句】
1. “他总是面带微笑,对每个人都很友好,甚至对自己的对手。”
2. “当他表现优异的时候我真的为他感到高兴。”
3. “虽然他不再打篮球了,我仍然很喜欢他。”
4. “他非常热心和幽默。”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "inchina"应为"china"
• "e_cited"应为"excited"
• "ne_t"应为"next"
• "very body"应为"everybody"
• "是自己的对手"应为"即使是自己的对手"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语对照结构清晰,便于理解与学习
✓ 情感真挚自然,以日常观赛体验体现崇拜之情
✓ 人物描写兼顾技艺与品格,立意积极向上
✓ 语言简洁流畅,符合初一学生表达水平