考研英语一小作文范文

250字
主题:体质提升、教育均衡、校园生活、身心发展

dear president,

i am very glad that you attach great importance to student’s physical condition. i am writing to give some suggestions concerning this issue.

to arrange some proper e_tracurricular activities is beneficial for improving student’s physical condition. nowadays many students focus their attention on study, which surely does harm to their body. thus they should be encouraged to participate in e_ercise. meantime, the shool should make a scientific regulation so as to ensure students to have enough time to do the e_ercise as much as possible.

i believe you will take my advice into consideration.

truly yours,

li ming

精选读者点评

开头称呼和结尾格式都对,但“dear president”没大写,“truly yours”少了个h,这种细节,阅卷老师真会扣分哦!

考研英语一小作文范文及点评

450字
主题:身心健康、教育平衡、校园治理、学业与体能、大学责任

honorable president,

i’m writing this letter to e_press my views concerning about how to improve the health status among our university students. my suggestions are as follows.

firstly, we should pay more attention to the physical conditions of the undergraduates rather than their academic performances. secondly, adequate pe lessons should be guaranteed in their course systems. finally, we hope that our university should regularly organize various e_tracurricular activities. through the implementation of the above methods, i am convinced that the health conditions of our college students could be enhanced considerably.

i am looking forward to your reply and i will appreciate your consideration for my proposals.

yours sincerely,

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本篇考研英语一的小作文是考研常见的建议信,题材涉及大学校园生活,考生应该比较熟悉,难度不大。需要注意的是小作文重在语句的精炼,在信中要清晰明了地表达观点、列明论点。考生在书写时,应当首先表明写此信件的目的;然后具体阐述几个方面,并可借用firstly, secondly, finally等标示词有条理地阐明自己的建议;最后写希望收信人给予回复或采纳,并表示感谢。

精选读者点评

这封建议信结构挺稳当,目的明确、三点建议也分得清,结尾礼节稳妥贴切。倒是“concerning about”重复啰嗦啦,“e_press”拼错了,“e_tracurricular”少了个c,这些小窟窿漏风,阅卷老师一眼就瞅见了。

考研英语作文范文小作文

300字
主题:健康促进、学校管理、学生发展、体育育人、建言献策

2026年考研英语作文范文(小作文)已公布,具体英语范文内容请各位考生及时查看如下,尽请关注!

dear my president,

i am writing to e_press my suggestions with regard to improve our students’ physical condition, and i will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

in my personal level, i find no better suggestions other than the following two: in the first place, we should be offered more time to take physical e_ercise between lessons, even if in the cold winter. what’s more, if possible, our school can establish more sports activities in the afternoon to enhance our constitution, meanwhile it also can enrich our life.

i hope you will find these proposals useful, and i hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

yours sincerely,

li ming

精选读者点评

这封建议信格式挺规范,称呼和落款都对。稍显“e_press”“e_ercise”里下划线是咋回事?打字漏了字母还是故意藏起来?下次写完记得通读一遍,别让小疏忽抢了内容的风头。