假期旅游

900字
主题:理性出行、生活成本、休闲质量、公共空间、消费理性、压力缓解

for most people, they will choose to travel during holiday because they want to relieve themselves from the high pressure of work. however, it happens quite often that people often ran into traffic jams on the way to travel. some people think that we can rela_ ourselves by traveling no matter of how many people there. some people would rather to stay in home than going out to travel because they think there are too many people swarm into the scenic spots. in my point of view, i would rather to stay indoors rather than going out to travel. reasons are listed below.

对于许多人来说,都会选择假期去旅游,因为他们想要从巨大的工作压力中解放自己。但是,在去旅游的路上遇到交通堵塞的事情经常发生。一些人认为不管有多少 人,我们还是可以通过旅游来放松自己。一些人情愿呆在家里也不远出去旅游,因为他们觉得旅游景点的人太多了。就我看来,我情愿呆在家里也不远走出去旅游。 原因如下:

firstly, during holiday, so many people swarm into the travel spots that we can’t enjoy ourselves to the full. for most people, they want to travel because during holiday, they can have several days to relieve themselves by traveling. however, so many people crowd together will make their tour lose the original fun.

第一,在假期期间,太多的人聚集在旅游景点,我们不能玩的很进行。对于很多人来说,他们想要在假期旅游因为他们在假期的时候才有几天的时间来放松自己。但是,太多的人拥挤在一起,就会失去旅游的本身的乐趣。

secondly, during holiday, price will be rising drastically. it is known to all that you need to spend much more to buy things or taking bus or any other transportation since many retailers will raise goods’ price during this holiday to get fat profits.

第二,在假期期间,物价会大幅上涨。众所周知,你需要支付更多的钱来买东西或坐车或者乘坐其他的交通工具,因为很多的商家会在此期间通过抬高物价来获取丰厚的利润。

all in all, travel during holiday is not a good choice for us since its inconvenience in traveling among a huge crowd of people and also the dramatically high price for goods and transportations will let us pay e_tra money.

总之, 在假期旅游并不是一个好的选择。不仅是因为在旅游的时候穿梭于人群中会很不方便,而且也因为假期期间的物价及交通费用会飞涨而让我们多支付额外费用。

精选读者点评

这篇作文把“人挤人”“涨价”写得分外当真!尤其是“太多人挤在一起,旅游就失去本来的乐趣”这句,像自己心里嘀咕出来的,比套话强多了。但注意哦,“ran into”“would rather to stay”这些小错误漏掉了,下次写完多读两遍,耳朵会帮你揪出来~

最美的语言 the most beautiful language

550字
主题:语言之美、文化认同、跨语际比较、国际场合、民族特性

for chinese people, the most beautiful language of course is chinese. as the world gets globalized, more and more foreigners learn chinese. but it is known to all that french is believed to be the most beautiful language in the world. on the one hand, french is very precise, the meaning of every word has only one meaning. unlike english, most words have several meaning, which sometimes may be misread by people. so for the papers used in the offical occasions, they are usually written in french. such as the papers used in the united nations, every word has the very precise meaning. on the other hand, french people are very romantic, the french kiss is famous around the world. it is said that the couples are always seen to kissing in the public occasions in france and it is accepted. all of these make french the most beautiful language.

对于中国人来说,最美丽的语言当然是汉语。随着世界变得越来越全球化,越来越多的外国人学习汉语。但众所周知,法语被认为是世界上最美丽的语言。一方面,法语是非常精确的,每一个字对应一个意思。与英语不同,大多数单词有几个意思,有时可能会被人误解。对于在正式场合中使用的文件,通常是用法语写的。如在联合国使用的文件,每一个字都有非常精确的意义。另一方面,法国人很浪漫,法式香吻在全世界都出名。据说在法国人们总能看到情侣在公共场合接吻,这也被大众所接受。所有这些使得法语成为最美丽的语言。

精选读者点评

法语真浪漫?那“我爱你”用汉语说,是不是更烫嘴?你写“法式香吻全世界出名”,我倒想问问,巴黎街头真没人脸红吗!

750字
主题:城乡对比、生活节奏、自然节律、人文温度、季节体验

城市

对于城市里的人们来说,夏天无疑是一个恶梦。而炽热的阳光就是这个恶梦中的恶魔。

高楼如同一面巨大的屏障,使市内吹不进一丝风。阳光发了疯似的猛烈地射向大地。高楼的墙壁如同一面镜子,尽其可能地反射着每一寸阳光。路面被阳光烤得发了白,道路两旁的树叶打着蔫,无精打采地垂头看着那些都快贴到地面的小草。汽车好像被施了咒语一样,无声无息地在路上慢慢悠悠地走着。出了门的人,衣服马上被汗水所浸湿。似乎外界没有一个景象能使人打起精神。

室内由于受到了空调的关照,格外凉爽。空调的室外机嗡嗡地响着,门和窗户的缝隙里,凉气欢快地向外跑着,以至于每个路过的人都能感受到这个夏日里难得的凉气。屋里的人尽可能地享受着这个美好的时光,想到一会又要上班,人们的脸上马上又露出了几丝痛苦的表情。

整个夏日城市里的人们就这样痛苦地熬着一天又一天。偶尔一阵暴雨来临,人们便欣喜若狂。关闭已久的窗户马上便被这场暴雨所浇开,人们张开了大口,使劲呼吸着暴雨带来的新鲜的空气。但这清凉马上又会被烈日所取代。等待他们的依旧是夏日的炎热。

乡村

乡村给人留下的印象永远是静谧的。这里远离城市的喧嚣,有的仅是几丝宁静。

巨大的树木遮蔽了农家的房屋,也遮蔽了夏日的骄阳。虽然这里没有空调,但有着胜似空调的清凉。

这里的人们是宁静的,他们坐在大树下,或是编着竹篓;或是悠闲地扇着大蒲扇;或是微闭双眼小憩。小孩子偎依在老人的腿上,听着爷爷奶奶给他们讲着抗战故事。

这里的家禽是悠闲的。老母鸡带着一群小鸡在大树底下找虫吃,鸭子在河里慢慢地游着。就连烈日当空的正午也是如此。

我想“绿树阴浓夏日长,楼台倒影入池塘。水晶帘动微风起,满架蔷薇一院香。”这句诗写的就是这样的乡村夏日美景吧。

夏——一个令城市人烦躁,令乡村人陶醉的季节。

精选读者点评

这个“恶魔”用得真狠!阳光被写出了灵魂,像有爪子有牙齿,后头高楼当镜子、路面发白、树叶打蔫,全是它干的坏事。心里立体可感,笔下就有温度。