初中简单英语作文带翻译-读书的好处

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主题:成长、启蒙、快乐、希望、学习、韵律

a famous saying goes like this: knowledge is power. and the knowledge is in the books. i think reading books is very interesting! there is a children’s song here. take a look, it is very beautiful!

star light

star bright

first star i see tonight

wish i might

have the wish i wish tonight

it is a rhyme. it sounds spry. im sure you will get happy while you read this children’s song. don’t you think it is a good song?

certainly, reading famous books is good for us too. its good for our writing.

i hope everyone will like reading, and the reading is good for everyone!

俗话说:知识就是力量。知识就是在书本里。我认为读书很有趣!这里有一首儿童歌曲。看一看,它很漂亮!

星光

明亮的星

第一颗星,我看到今晚

希望我可以

祝今晚我愿

这是一个韵。这听起来轻快。我敢肯定,你会得到快乐,而你读了这孩子的歌。你不认为这是一首很好的歌吗?

当然,读书对我们也有好处。这对我们的写作有好处。

我希望每个人都喜欢读书,而读书对每个人都有好处!

精选读者点评

这句“星光/明亮的星”翻得真灵巧!中英文对照着读,像在玩语言跷跷板,唯独后半段“第一颗星,我看到今晚”语序有点硬,试试调成“今晚我看见的第一颗星”哦!

初中万圣节英语作文 what is halloween?

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主题:节日习俗、文化符号、传统演变、色彩象征

what is halloween?

halloween is a holiday celebrated on october 31. by tradition, halloween begins after sunset. long ago, people believed that witches gathered together and ghosts roamed the world on halloween. today, most people no longer believe in ghosts and witches. but these supernatural beings are still a part of halloween.

the colors black and orange are also a part of halloween. black is a symbol for night and orange is the color of pumpkins. a jack-o-lantern is a hollowed-out pumpkin with a face carved on one side. candles are usually placed inside, giving the face a spooky glow.

精选读者点评

开头设问很机灵!但“what is halloween?”这句英文混在中文作文里,像书包里掉出颗糖,甜是甜,可硌牙。下回统一用中文提问哈。

smile

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主题:积极心态、人际温度、生命回应、乐观哲学

smile is a kind of language. when you meet somebody,smiling always means that you are a kind person. nobody will hate to talk with a person with a smile on his face. a saying goes, life is a mirror. if you smile to it.it will smile to you.”i think keeping smiling in life shows you are an optimistic person. we can make our life better if we often smile.

注释:

1) with a smile on his face面带微笑

2) a say goes俗话说

3) an optimistic person乐天派

精选读者点评

smile is a kind of language,开头这句让人精神一振!但后面“a saying goes”和“i think”太像抄模板了,试试把“生活是镜子”那句改成你自己的小故事?比如上次摔倒还冲同学笑,结果她也笑了……