我的故乡my hometown

200字
主题:地域特色、安居乐业、人地和谐、四季宜人

高一年级英语作文:my hometown

my home is in a town. it lies in the east of zhejiang near the east sea.it has a population of fifty thousand. our town is in the south of our county.the ease sea is to the east of the town. to the south is flat land. mountains are on the west. and a river runs from north to south in the west of my town.

the weather here is good. it is not so cold in winter or so hot in summer. so the sea near my town is full of all sorts of fish. the fishermen of my home town are all living a happy life.

精选读者点评

地理方位感真强!东、南、西、北、河、山、海,全安排得明明白白,像摊开一张小地图,可“ease sea”该是“east sea”吧?顺手改了哈。

smile

550字
主题:情绪力量、人际联结、积极人生、内在光芒、生活哲学、心灵温度

高中英语作文:smile

people always say that smile is the most beautiful person card. i strongly agree with them. smile likes the sunshine that can bring warmthto people and make people happy. when you are happy, you will smile subconsciously, because a good mood brings smile to your face. but, you also should smile when you are upset, because smile might bring you confidence, courage so that cheer yourself up.

人们常说,微笑是一个人最美丽的名片。我很同意他们的看法。微笑就像是阳光给人们带来温暖,让人们快乐。当你开心的时候,你会潜意识的微笑,因为好心情会使你脸上绽放笑容。但是,你烦恼的时候你也应该微笑,因为微笑能给你带来自信和勇气,从而使你的心情好起来。

smiling showsgood mood and positive attitude to life, so that those people who always smile can attract the others easily, because people like to build relationship with smiling ones. moreover, smiling shows sincere and confidence. no matter to yourself or others, they both important. besides, when you smile to the world, the world is smiling at you. therefore, keep smiling and show you best to the world.

微笑是对生活有良好心境和乐观态度的表现,因而那些经常微笑的人能够容易吸引别人,因为人们喜欢和爱笑的人打交道。而且,微笑表达了真诚和自信。不管是对你自己还是对别人微笑,两者都很重要。除此之外,当你对世界微笑的时候,世界也会对你微笑。因此,请保持微笑,把你的一面展示给世界。

精选读者点评

这个“smile is the most beautiful person card”写得真有意思!把名片和微笑连起来,小聪明藏在笨拙里,改一个词:“personal card”更地道。后面“sunshine that can bring warmthto people”少了个空格,但暖意扑面而来,我喜欢。

第50-51期

250字
主题:榜样力量、奋斗精神、职业坚守、文化影响、青春记忆

第50期

my favorite male actor

i like to watch movie, i had watched many movies, jackie chen is my favorite male actor.

when i was small, i watched jackie chen’s action movie, he can beat many guys at the same time, he is many teenagers’ hero.

in the last ten years, jackie chen has aimed at the foreign market, he took many movies and cooperated with foreign stars, he has achieved great success.

jackie’s success teaches us a lesson, the secret of achieving success is hard work.

jackie got wounded when he shot films, he has many scars on his body.

now he is over 50, but he is going on his playing, we are happy to see jackie chen’s movie.

精选读者点评

句子主谓宾基本清楚,but “i had watched”时态不对哦,“小时候看”该用一般过去时!还有“he is many teenagers’ hero”这句,冠词漏啦,补个“a”试试?

桂林美景

700字
主题:自然之美、生态宜居、地质奇观、诗意山水、旅游胜地

高中英语作文大全:桂林美景

guilin is a sunny land in my mind. i dream of going there on holiday every year. its well-known for its natural beauty.

在我的印象中桂林是阳光明媚的地方。我每年都梦想去那里度假。桂林以它美丽的自然风光出名。

firstly, owing to the good latitude, its neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. so it seems like spring all the year round.

首先,由于良好的纬度,冬天不是很冷夏天也不太热。所以那里是四季如春。

secondly, as no large industry there and focus on tourism, theres almost no pollution. maybe we can enjoy our beautiful nature there.

其次,由于那里没有大型工业区,重点关注的是旅游,所以那里几乎没有污染。也许我们可以在那里享受到我们大自然的美丽的风光。

thirdly, the landscape in guilin is the best in the world. for e_ample, lijiang river is as clean as a mirror. while boating on lijiang river, i found myself in wonderland. the mountains along the river are so fantastic. some of them look like animals; some of them look like plants; and some of them look like human beings. the elephant mountain, its the symbol of the city.

第三,在桂林的景观是世界上的。例如,丽江像镜子一样干净。在丽江上划船,我觉得自己犹如在仙境中一般。河边的山是如此的奇妙。其中一些看起来像动物;有些看起来像植物;有些看起来像人类。象鼻山,是这个城市的象征。

whats more, its also worth visiting the silver cave. its eroded by carbon dio_ide and water falls. as you enter into the cave, you will discover yourself in another fanciful world. you can imagine how magic our nature is.

而且,银子岩也是值得参观的。它是由二氧化碳和倾斜而下的水形成的。你进入洞中,你会觉得自己身处于一个幻想中的世界。你无法想象我们的大自然是多么的神奇。

精选读者点评

桂林真美啊!象鼻山那段描写得跃然纸上,小船一划,山就动起来了,“像动物、像植物、像人”,这三连比历历在目,读着嘴角不自觉上扬。