难忘的一天

250字
主题:责任意识、集体参与、劳动教育、快乐奉献、成长体验

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

we got there at nine o'clock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the children's playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard.

at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

精选读者点评

这个“us”用得真自然!开头就带人进现场,像拉着手一起走进公园。但“tourist”要加s哦~

小学生叙事英语作文范文

300字
主题:节日快乐、自然观察、亲子陪伴、校园生活、成长记忆

小学生叙事英语作文范文

may first is a sunday. and it is the labor’s day. my mother said to me :“open your eyes!and look out of the window. what a fine day! let’s go to park,” so my mother, my classmate and i went to the park. we took some foods in my schoolbag. on the way to the park. i saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. i saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. it’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. i saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. i ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. they were wonderful.

in the afternoon, we went to the zoo. i visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.

may day is my favorite day!

精选读者点评

满纸都是颜色和小动物!蓝的天、粉的花、黄的香蕉、紫的蝴蝶……像打翻了调色盘。稍显“popcorn, cornflakes”这些词拼写有点跳脚,下次写完悄悄读两遍?

英语作文欣赏 若干......

250字
主题:集体行动、服务意识、成长体验、责任担当

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

we got there at nine o’clock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the children’s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard.

at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

精选读者点评

写得挺顺溜!动词用得真心,“ planted ”“ watered ”“ collected ”“ cleaned ”,全是真干活的样子。但“ tourist ”要加s哦,小细节别漏啦~