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五一劳动节就要到了，也马上要迎来一个五一小长假，你会如何度过劳动节和五一假期呢?你的五一假期有出游的计划么?这是关于五一劳动节假期旅游的英语作文，希望给你一些参考。
last week i went to mount emei in sichuan province with my family. early in the morning, we took a ta_i to beijing west railway station. the station was very lively.
half an hour later, we got on the train. on the train, we had a lot of fun. after 26 hours, we reached sichuan. there, we took many photos and had a goodtime. 5 days later, we came back to the beijing. even though my travel seemed really short, but my memory of the pleasant trip will last long.
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作文类型：英语作文、节日主题作文、旅游记叙文
适合年级：初中一年级、初中二年级、初中三年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
lively、pleasant、short、good、early
【好词好句】
1. the station was very lively.
2. even though my travel seemed really short, but my memory of the pleasant trip will last long.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "ta_i"应为"taxi"
• "sichuan"应为"sichuan"
• "beijing"应为"beijing"
• "goodtime"应为"good time"
• "5 days later"应为"five days later"或"five days later"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以时间线索清晰展开旅行过程
✓ 用对比手法突出短暂行程与长久记忆的张力
✓ 语言简洁自然，符合初中生表达水平
