爬山

【导语】关于重阳节的英语作文翻译:爬山,双语对照自然融入,体现生活化语言实践,以儿童视角对比两处长城,观察细致、感受真实。

爬山

✎作文范文

主题: 敬老、亲情、节俗、乡土、成长、自然

today is september 9th, the double ninth festival, also called the festival for the elderly, climbing the chung yeung festival customs, autumn in september, high qishuang days, our family went to the mountains. we climbed today is my grandparents in buji water park, water park has a smaller version of the the great wall, similar to the the great wall in beijing, i saw a small park in the great wall, i climb up step by step, i think if you run too fast if it did not have the strength, i do not feel a bit tired, because i have the confidence to climb to the top of the mountain, this is a small the great wall, with my summer vacation to beijing to climb the great wall is not the same, beijing the great wall is very long, very long, a large piece of stone, before qin shihuang built for you, in order to resist the invasion of the huns in the original the building, and it is difficult to climb, and my dad, mom never climbed haohanpo sat down the block. the great wall water park is very easy to climb, water park is the the great wall before the local villagers because it doesn rain for a long time. on the construction of rain. i climbed up and i thought it was only 20 minutes before i left. im not tired, but its fun. i at the top of the hill also saw the nanling village house, also can see the donghu lake reservoir, i thought station here can see my grandma and grandpas house, the results can not see. we did not go down the mountain the great wall, and walk the big road. on the way down the mountain to see the heros introduction, there are liu hulan, huang jiguang, lei feng, dong zhongrui, etc.. after reading it, i went to the playground to play with a swinging umbrella. finish to have lunch, to eat on pigeon, pigeon is really good, very suitable for my taste.

今天是九月九日重阳节,也叫老人节,重阳节有登高的习俗,金秋九月,天高气爽,我们一家人去爬山。

我们今天去爬的是我爷爷奶奶家布吉的求水山公园,求水山公园有一条缩小版的长城,跟北京的长城相似,我一进去公园就看到了小长城,我一步一步往上爬,我想如果跑得太快的话就一下没有力气了,我感觉一点也不累,因为我有信心爬到山顶,这是一个小长城,跟我放暑假去北京爬长城不一样,北京长城是很长,很长,石头好大一块,是以前秦始皇修建你的,为了抵御匈奴入侵中原而修建的,并且很难爬,我和爸爸,妈妈都没有爬到好汉坡就坐着滑车下来了。求水山公园长城却很容易爬上去,求水山公园的长城是以前当地的村民因为好久不下雨。上去求雨修建的。

我没有费多大劲就爬上去了,而且我觉得才过20分钟呢。我爬上去一点也不累,还觉得挺好玩。我在山顶还看到整个南岭村的房子,还可以看到整个东湖水库,我还以为站在这里可以看到我爷爷奶奶家,结果看不到。我们下山就没有走长城了,走的大马路。在下山的路上还看到了一下英雄的介绍,有刘胡兰,黄继光,雷锋,董重瑞,等等。看完了就去游乐场玩了旋转摇摆伞。玩完就吃中饭去了,去吃了考乳鸽,乳鸽真好吃,很适合我的口味。

精选读者点评

重阳登高写得鲜活立体!“一步一步往上爬”“才过20分钟呢”,这语气多像你边喘气边笑的样子。小长城和北京长城的对比,不刻意却有味道。结尾乳鸽收得俏皮,但“考乳鸽”的“考”字漏了“火”字旁哦~

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、节日主题作文、游记

适合年级:小学四年级、五年级、六年级

【成语使用】

天高气爽、金秋九月

【形容词】

缩小版、相似、长长、大大、难、容易、好玩、适合

【好词好句】

1. 金秋九月,天高气爽,我们一家人去爬山。

2. 我一步一步往上爬,我想如果跑得太快的话就一下没有力气了。

3. 我在山顶还看到整个南岭村的房子,还可以看到整个东湖水库。

4. 乳鸽真好吃,很适合我的口味。

【修辞手法】

比喻:将求水山公园的长城比作“缩小版的长城”,突出其形似而规模小的特点

引用:文中未见诗句或名言引用

排比:“北京长城是很长,很长,石头好大一块”,以重复和并列强化视觉印象

【文字校对】

• "chung yeung"应为"chong yang"

• "qishuang"应为"qìshuǎng"

• "haohanpo"应为"hàohànpō"

• "dong zhongrui"应为"dǒng cúnruǐ"

• "考乳鸽"应为"烤乳鸽"

【写作亮点】

✓ 双语对照自然融入,体现生活化语言实践

✓ 以儿童视角对比两处长城,观察细致、感受真实

✓ 时间感与身体感交织,“才过20分钟”“一点也不累”凸显登临之轻快

✓ 地理与人文结合,在登高途中自然带出英雄介绍与家乡风貌

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