白色污染的英语作文范文

【导语】白色污染的英语作文范文,开篇点明社会背景,逻辑清晰,运用not only...but also...结构增强表达力度。

白色污染的英语作文范文

作文范文

主题: 环保意识、可持续发展、生态责任、绿色生活、科学认知

白色污染的英语作文范文

with the remarkable improvement of people’s living standard, people tend to buy more goods. as a result, a plenty of plastic bags are threw around and caused white pollution. not only does it do harm to the environment, but also give people the impression that the city is dirty. as we all known, plastic bags are non-biodegradable material and it will stay in the soil for a long time. what’s worse, the poison released from the plastic bags is harmful.

精选读者点评

塑料袋“threw around”?动词用错了,是thrown!还有“a plenty of”也不对哦~错别字和搭配小问题挺多,但观点很真心,继续加油!

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:英语应用文、环保主题议论文

适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级

【成语使用】

【形容词】

remarkable、non-biodegradable、harmful、dirty、long、worse

【好词好句】

1. with the remarkable improvement of people’s living standard, people tend to buy more goods.

2. not only does it do harm to the environment, but also give people the impression that the city is dirty.

3. plastic bags are non-biodegradable material and it will stay in the soil for a long time.

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "a plenty of"应为"plenty of"

• "threw"应为"thrown"

• "as we all known"应为"as we all know"

• "it will stay"应为"they will stay"(主语plastic bags为复数)

【写作亮点】

✓ 开篇点明社会背景,逻辑清晰

✓ 运用not only...but also...结构增强表达力度

✓ 准确使用非谓语与从句体现语法意识

✓ 紧扣环保议题,立意明确且具现实意义

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