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fathers day is a celebration honoring fathers and celebrating fatherhood.fathers day was first born in 1910 in the united states.it was proposed by a lady when she was celebrating mothers day.many countries celebrate it on the third sunday of june,but it is also celebrated widely on other days.the celebrations are often related to gifts giving and family dinners.on fathers day,people choose specific flowers to respect for his father.in china,because of the national character,few people wear flowers to show his respect for his father and there is no large celebrations.but on the influence of the west,there are a growing number of people celebrate this holiday and tell their love to fathers.
父亲节是纪念祖先和庆祝父亲。父亲节是第一个出世的1910在美国。它是由一个女人提出的当她庆祝母亲节。许多国家庆祝它在六月的第三个星期日，但也广泛庆祝其他日子庆祝通常。送礼物及家庭聚餐有关。在父亲节这天，人们选择特定的鲜花来表示对父亲的尊敬。在中国，由于民族的性格，很少有人穿花来表达自己对父亲的尊敬，也没有大的庆祝。但是受西方的影响，越来越多的人们庆祝这个节日，向父亲表达他们的爱。
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作文类型：说明文、应用文
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
特定、广泛、西方、民族、 growing（注：此为英文形容词，非中文形容词）
【好词好句】
1. "fathers day is a celebration honoring fathers and celebrating fatherhood."
2. "many countries celebrate it on the third sunday of june, but it is also celebrated widely on other days."
3. "on fathers day, people choose specific flowers to respect for his father."
4. "but on the influence of the west, there are a growing number of people celebrate this holiday and tell their love to fathers."
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "first born"应为"first established"
• "a lady"应为"a woman"
• "when she was celebrating mothers day"应为"while attending a mother's day service"
• "respect for his father"应为"show respect to their fathers"
• "wear flowers"应为"wear flowers"
• "few people wear flowers to show his respect"应为"few people wear flowers to show their respect"
• "on the influence of the west"应为"under the influence of the west"
• "there are a growing number of people celebrate"应为"an increasing number of people celebrate"
【写作亮点】
✓ 选题贴近生活，体现中西文化比较意识
✓ 结构清晰，按起源、时间、形式、地域差异逐层展开
✓ 具备基本跨文化观察视角，关注中国本土化接受过程
✓ 中英双语对照呈现，体现语言实践意识
