✎作文范文
directions: for this part,you are allowed 30 minutesto write a shortessay on the use of robots. trytoimagine what will happen whenrobots take theplace of human beings in industryas well aspeople’sdaily lives. you are required to write at least150wordsbut no more than 200 words.
参考范文
第一段:引出文章话题.说明技术的发展对人类生活的改变.
第二段:针对此现象作出观点的阐述
第三段:得出结论.
it is held bysome people that knowledge ispower,especially scientific andtechnologicalknowledge. science andtechnology arethe motive power of the socialdevelopment, whichconstitute a primary productive force. theuse of robots istheproduce of development of science and technology.
people’s viewson the use of robots vary from person toperson. some hold that human lifecannotcontinue without the use ofrobots. for many years, human society has developedwith theuse ofscience and technology. so the lifewith the use of robots we areliving now is moreefficient than thatof our fore fathers. they go on to pointout that the use of robotshas broughtabout many changes in peoples life. fore_ample,through the use of robots can improve thework efficiency andavoiddangerous events happening in our life in that we can requirerobotsto do someworks with danger instead of humanbeings.
science andtechnology of robots are the crystallization ofhuman wisdom. it brought agloriouspast to humanity, also willbring bright future to mankind.
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：议论文、应用文
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
事半功倍、防患未然
【形容词】
高效、危险、光荣、光明、初级、社会
【好词好句】
1. “science and technology are the motive power of the social development, which constitute a primary productive force.”
2. “the life with the use of robots we are living now is more efficient than that of our forefathers.”
3. “science and technology of robots are the crystallization of human wisdom.”
【修辞手法】
比喻：将“science and technology”比作“motive power”，凸显其驱动社会发展的作用
引用：“knowledge is power”，出自弗朗西斯·培根
【文字校对】
• "fore_ample"应为"for example"
• "requirerobotsto do someworks"应为"require robots to do some works"
• "human lifecannotcontinue"应为"human life cannot continue"
• "it brought agloriouspast"应为"it brought a glorious past"
【写作亮点】
✓ 观点清晰，结构完整，符合议论文三段式范式
✓ 中英双语思维自然融合，体现跨文化表达意识
✓ 善用抽象概念具象化表述，如“motive power”“crystallization”增强表现力
✓ 逻辑衔接词丰富，“so”“for example”“also”等提升行文连贯性