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为什么尊重是很重要?(why respect is important?)
why respect is importantgoing back in time, respect played an important role in survival. if we think of a small tribe wandering in the desert,we can imagine that a person not respected by anyone could be left behind and die. such a person was considered to have no worth, no importance, no value to the group.
this, i believe is the foundation of our psychological need to feel respected.
nowadays it seems much more possible to survive without being respected. someone could, for e_ample, inherit a large sum of money, have many servants and employees and have salesmen constantly calling on him and catering to him,yet not be respected in the least. someone could also make a lot of money through having a particular talent which is valued, such as being able to dunk a basketball yet not really be respected, perhaps because of the way he treats others.
still, there is a value to respect which money can buy. though someones life might not depend on it, there are times, many times in fact, when another person has the chance to make a personal decision--a judgment call. when that person feels sincere respect for someone else, they will make a different decision than if they feel no respect, even if they have customarily shown a false, pseudo-respect to the person.
in summary, it is for both evolutionary and practical reasons that respect is important, and also why we simply feel better when we are respected.
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：议论文、英语写作、跨文化思考
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
无
【形容词】
important、small、sincere、false、pseudo、evolutionary、practical、personal
【好词好句】
1. “why respect is important going back in time, respect played an important role in survival.”
2. “a person not respected by anyone could be left behind and die.”
3. “there are times, many times in fact, when another person has the chance to make a personal decision--a judgment call.”
4. “it is for both evolutionary and practical reasons that respect is important, and also why we simply feel better when we are respected.”
【修辞手法】
比喻：将尊重比作“生存的基石”，隐含于“foundation of our psychological need”中，凸显其深层心理支撑作用
【文字校对】
• "importantgoing"应为"important. going"
• "e_ample"应为"example"
• "salesmen constantly calling on him and catering to him,yet"应为"salesmen constantly calling on him and catering to him, yet"
• "someones life"应为"someone’s life"
【写作亮点】
✓ 视野开阔，从远古部落切入，建立尊重与生存的原始关联
✓ 逻辑清晰，以“过去—现在—本质”三层递进展开论述
✓ 语言自然，口语化表达与思辨性内容融合得当
✓ 结尾凝练，将进化动因、现实效用与情感需求三重维度收束一体