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关于教育孩子 teaching children
we often hear that different methods to teach children will have different result. and different children adapt different methods. luckily, i think my parents’ teaching method fits me very much and i am glad to have such parents. they are my friends. we often talk and play together. they often tell me to be a kind-hearted person by words and they also act in that way. if they find that i have any wrong thought, they will try to correct it in a gentle way. if they find me do the same wrong thing again and again, they will criticize me badly, which makes me do not dare to do it ne_t time. and nobody will speak for me.
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：记叙文、议论文
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
kind-hearted、gentle、wrong、bad、lucky
【好词好句】
1. they are my friends. we often talk and play together.
2. they often tell me to be a kind-hearted person by words and they also act in that way.
3. if they find that i have any wrong thought, they will try to correct it in a gentle way.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "ne_t"应为"next"
• "adapt"应为"adapt to"
• "do the same wrong thing"应为"do the same wrong thing"
• "criticize me badly"宜改为"criticize me seriously"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以第一人称真实呈现亲子关系的温度与分寸
✓ 中英混排自然体现双语学习者表达习惯
✓ “they are my friends”等短句节奏明快，富有口语感染力
✓ 对教育方式的观察细致，呈现“言传”与“身教”的双重维度