my family 英语作文范文带翻译

【导语】my family 英语作文范文带翻译,结构清晰,按“妈妈—爸爸—自己”顺序展开,层次分明,语言质朴自然,体现儿童真实口吻与观察视角。

my family 英语作文范文带翻译

作文范文

主题: 亲情、成长、日常、自我介绍、家庭关系

there are three people in my family. they’re father, mother and i. my mother is a chinese teacher. she is not tall, nor short, just right. she is fat. she likes to eat noodles and vegetables. her favorite colors are brown and red. she doesn’t like animals. she lets me to learn playing piano. i love her because she is nice and hard-working. she cares for me a lot. she is take cares of grandparents. sometime my father and my mother fight each other. my father is a manger. he is thirty-si_ years old. he is fat and tall. he is good at maths and physics. he cares for me much. sometimes he buys me toy. i like my dad. now it’s my turn. my name is tina. i’m eleven years old. i’m not thin, nor fat, just right. i’m tall. i go to simon english school. i’m in grade four class one. i like to eat french-fries and some friends but i don’t like meat. i can paint. my best friends are lily and helen. my favorite colors are black, white, yellow and blue. sometime in my family everything is very nice.

中文翻译:

我家有三口人,他们是爸爸妈妈和我。 我的母亲是个语文老师,她中等身材,她比较胖。她喜欢吃面条和蔬菜。妈妈最喜欢的颜色是棕色和红色。她不喜欢动物。她让我学习弹钢琴。我爱她,因为她对我好又勤劳。她特别关心我,也关心爷爷奶奶,但是有时,爸爸和妈妈就会吵架。 我的父亲是个经理,他今年36岁。他又高又,他擅长数学和物理。他也特别关心我,他经常给我买玩具,我喜欢我的爸爸。 现在轮到我了,我的名字是蒂娜,我11岁,不瘦也不胖,我个头比较高。我在西门英语学校读书,我在四年级一班。我喜欢吃的法国薯条及类似的东西,但我不爱吃肉。我可以画画,我的朋友莉莉和海伦。我最喜欢的颜色是黑色,白色,黄色和蓝色。 有时在我家的一切都是非常好的。

精选读者点评

“她让我学习弹钢琴”时,笔画都用力了,妈妈的坚持,孩子记住了,还悄悄藏进句子里。后面“有时家里一切很好”那句,像踮脚推开一扇门,里头光晃眼。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、写人作文、家庭生活类

适合年级:小学四年级、五年级、六年级

【形容词】

中等、胖、高、勤劳、 nice、hard-working、tall、nice

【好词好句】

1. she is not tall, nor short, just right.

2. she cares for me a lot.

3. sometimes in my family everything is very nice.

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "manger"应为"manager"

• "thirty-si_"应为"thirty-six"

• "sometime"应为"sometimes"(两处)

• "she is take cares of grandparents"应为"she takes care of grandparents"

• "i like to eat french-fries and some friends"应为"i like to eat french fries and make some friends"

• "my best friends are lily and helen. my favorite colors are black, white, yellow and blue."中句号误用,应为逗号连接并列分句

【写作亮点】

✓ 结构清晰,按“妈妈—爸爸—自己”顺序展开,层次分明

✓ 语言质朴自然,体现儿童真实口吻与观察视角

✓ 基本时态与人称保持一致,主干表达通顺

✓ 中英文对照呈现,展现双语学习意识

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