新年晚会

【导语】新年英语作文:新年晚会,中英文双语叙述自然穿插,体现语言实践意识,活动流程清晰,时间线索与空间转换富有现场感。

新年晚会

作文范文

主题: 集体欢庆、文化趣味、青春活力、同窗情谊

new year party

on new year's eve, our class had a party. the atmosphere was good. it was out of the ordinary from the very begining. the boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. we saw a boy named li _inmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. then with three resounding crow of a cock echoing in the hall, the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

then, the representative of the bedroom zhu guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. he added that li _inmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. they left us all in confusion. and it was our monitor who was quickwitted. he shouted our, he day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn. the hall after that, they had another item. this time li _inmin was placed in the middle of the circle. while he was standing there, the other three stood around him, each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. it was an idiom. this time i got it right: he dog stands out among a group of chickens.

then we all sang and played games until it was eleven o'clock at night. the old man on night watch came to turn off the lights. we had to tear ourselves away from the party.

from this activity, i discovered that many of our classmates are really talented singers.

新年晚会

除夕,我们班开了个晚会,气氛很好。一开始就不同凡俗,有个男生寝室出了个令人大感意外的节目。只见一个叫李新民的男生“啪”一下关掉了所有的灯,三声“鸡叫声”响彻大厅后。“啪”的一声,大厅又重放光明。

然后,该寝室的代表朱国章让我们大家猜一句关于上述情景的诗。他还解释说除了李新民属狗外,其他三人都属鸡。大家都给他们弄愣了。还是班长反应较快,喊道:“雄鸡三唱天下白!”结果全场轰然大笑。

然后,他们又出了一个节目,让李新民站在中间,其他三个人围着他每人拜厂120度。要求打一成语。这一次我猜中了:“狗立鸡群!”

接着,大家唱歌做游戏,玩到晚上11点多。值班的老大爷来熄灯时,我们才不得不结束晚会而回到各自的寝室。

通过这次活动。我发现班上很多同学都是天才歌手!

精选读者点评

这“狗立鸡群”改得妙!既扣住生肖,又带点,比原成语更贴晚会现场。话说回来“拜厂120度”怕是笔误?该是“摆出”或“拜成”吧?还有,“雄鸡三唱天下白”引用得准,但后头没接住,为啥笑?可以补半句,比如“原来‘狗’在中间当太阳呢”,就活了。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:记叙文、活动描写

适合年级:初二、初三、高一

【成语使用】

不同凡俗、令人大感意外、轰然大笑、狗立鸡群

【形容词】

明亮、意外、快速、热烈、天才

【好词好句】

1. “啪”一下关掉了所有的灯,三声“鸡叫声”响彻大厅后,“啪”的一声,大厅又重放光明。

2. 雄鸡三唱天下白!

3. 李新民站在中间,其他三个人围着他每人拜下120度。

【修辞手法】

比喻:“狗立鸡群”化用“鹤立鸡群”,以反差制造幽默效果

引用:“雄鸡三唱天下白”

排比:三声“鸡叫声”、三个属鸡的同学、三人各拜120度,形成节奏性呼应

【文字校对】

• "out of the ordinary"应为"out of the ordinary"

• "li _inmin"应为"li xinmin"

• "he dog stands out among a group of chickens"应为"the dog stands out among a group of chickens"

• "拜厂120度"应为"拜下120度"

• "天才歌手"宜改为"颇有天赋的歌手"更合语境

【写作亮点】

✓ 中英文双语叙述自然穿插,体现语言实践意识

✓ 活动流程清晰,时间线索与空间转换富有现场感

✓ 成语活用巧妙,“狗立鸡群”既扣生肖又显机趣

✓ 细节描写生动,“啪”字拟声、“三声鸡叫”、“120度”等数字与声响增强画面真实感

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