✎作文范文
seeding employment in u.k.
英国就业率
as can be seen clearly from the graph, the difference in the numbers of people working in thethree major employment sectors in the u.k. economy in the early 1980s was relatively small, with about 4 million workers in engineering, 5 million in agriculture and 5.5 million in theservice industries.
however, the period 1980-1990 saw significant changes in the relative sizes of these threeemployment sectors. there was a rapid decline in employment in agriculture, with the numberof workers dropping by more than 80%. on the other, employment oppor tunities in the serviceindustries increased sharply, especially after 1986, whereas the engineering sectore_perienced a gradual but constant decline.
trends in the above graph clearly indicate that the service industries will continue to employthe largest number of people at least for the ne_t few years, while the engineering sector willneed somewhat fewer workers in the ne_t decade. on the whole, the total number ofemployment offered in these three sectors was much smaller than ten years before and theredoesn seem to be any likelihood for improvement in the near future. so, students who aregoing to graduate soon may need to prepare to seek employment elsewhere.
cet6六级作文结构分析：
·inte rpret the graph
·predict the trends
_ engineering
_ service industries
_ agriculture
cet6六级作文内容分析：
本文是图表作文, 适合于六级或考研。学习本文时应注意写图表作文的常用句子和词语以及过渡词, 这样才能使文章既连贯又有层次感。注意看文中的划线处。
cet6六级作文万能句型：
drop by...% 下降百分之
rapid decline 急剧下降
increases harply 明显上升
...doesn seem to be any likelihood for improvement 似乎没有可能改善
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：图表作文、说明文
适合年级：高中三年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
significant、rapid、gradual、constant、largest、smaller
【好词好句】
1. as can be seen clearly from the graph, the difference in the numbers of people working in the three major employment sectors in the u.k. economy in the early 1980s was relatively small...
2. the period 1980–1990 saw significant changes in the relative sizes of these three employment sectors.
3. trends in the above graph clearly indicate that the service industries will continue to employ the largest number of people at least for the next few years...
4. so, students who are going to graduate soon may need to prepare to seek employment elsewhere.
【修辞手法】
排比：[“engineering / service industries / agriculture”在结构上形成并列列举，体现图表分析的条理性]
【文字校对】
• "seeding"应为"seeing"
• "thethree"应为"the three"
• "oppor tunities"应为"opportunities"
• "sectore_perienced"应为"sector experienced"
• "ne_t"应为"next"
• "doesn seem"应为"doesn’t seem"
• "cet6"应为"cet-6"
• "inte rpret"应为"interpret"
• "increases harply"应为"increases sharply"
【写作亮点】
✓ 数据对比清晰，时间节点明确，体现图表描述的基本逻辑
✓ 趋势预测有依据，结合“at least for the next few years”“in the next decade”等时间限定增强严谨性
✓ 句式富于变化，主动与被动交替使用，如“was relatively small”“was much smaller”“will continue to employ”
✓ 结尾落点现实关切，将宏观趋势与毕业生个体选择自然联结
