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在圣诞节来临之际,为大家精心整理了简短的圣诞节英语作文《christmas in united states of america》,以供大家参考,祝大家圣诞节快乐!
santa claus was born in us in the 1860s he was named this as he had a white beard and a belly, so he was named santa claus as this was the dutch word for st nicholas, sintaklaas. although the dutch had bought him with them in the 17th century, he did not become an important person at christmas until the novelist washington irving put him in a novel that he wrote in 1809. this first santa claus was still known as st. nicholas, he did smoke a pipe, and fly around in a wagon without any reindeer, but he did not have his red suit or live at the north pole, he did however bring presents to children every year.
in 1863 he was given the name santa claus and bore the red suit, pipe, and his reindeer and sleigh.
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作文类型:说明文、文化介绍类
适合年级:初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
简短、精心、重要、白色、红色、每年
【好词好句】
1. “santa claus was born in us in the 1860s”
2. “he did smoke a pipe, and fly around in a wagon without any reindeer”
3. “he did however bring presents to children every year”
4. “in 1863 he was given the name santa claus and bore the red suit, pipe, and his reindeer and sleigh”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "us"应为"the us"
• "sintaklaas"应为"sintaklaas"
• "bought"应为"brought"
• "st nicholas"应为"st. nicholas"
• "1860s"前缺冠词,宜为"the 1860s"
• "in 1863 he was given the name santa claus"中"santa claus"首字母未大写,应为"santa claus"
【写作亮点】
✓ 时间线索清晰,以18世纪至19世纪为轴呈现圣诞老人形象演变
✓ 人物特征描写具体,如“white beard”“red suit”“pipe”“reindeer and sleigh”等细节鲜明
✓ 叙述视角客观平稳,符合说明文语体要求
✓ 历史事实与文化符号自然融合,体现跨文化理解意识