✎作文范文
英语四级作文模板：申请信
your address
month, date, year
receivers address
dear ...,
i am e_tremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... and i would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ i am one hand, .... on the other hand, .... i am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
i shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. i will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ i am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
best regards for your health and success.
sincerely yours,
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：应用文、书信
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
precious、extreme、earliest、kind、great
【好词好句】
1. i am extremely pleased to hear from you.
2. i shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.
3. i am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
【修辞手法】
引用：i am extremely pleased to hear from you.
【文字校对】
• "e_tremely"应为"extremely"
• "an interview"前冠词使用不当，应为"a precious opportunity for an interview"或直接"an interview"
【写作亮点】
✓ 格式规范，符合英文申请信基本框架
✓ 语言得体，体现礼貌与诚恳的交际语气
✓ 句式多样，包含条件句、宾语从句等基础复合结构
✓ 关键信息层级清晰，目的明确、逻辑顺畅