✎作文范文
2026年6月大学英语四级作文范文50例
a letter of condolence
你在报纸上看到你的朋友王志的家乡被飓风袭击，请你写一封慰问信向他表示你的关心。
范文
dear wang,
in today’s newspaper, i read about the recent events in your town and i am writing to e_tend my deepest condolences.
it broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane. i couldn’t believe my eyes when i saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help. i am really worried about you and your family, and all your friends there. i am crossing my fingers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.
i can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and i want to e_tend to you my unwavering support. our government and many nongovernmental organizations are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things to send to america. i donated all my allowance that i have been saving for years.
i feel e_tremely sorry for this tragedy, and i will be looking forward to hearing from you. please pass my concern on to your parents.
yours sincerely,
meng fei
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：应用文、书信、慰问信
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
安全无恙、翘首以盼
【形容词】
深深的、悲惨的、小小的、焦急的、坚定的、必要的
【好词好句】
1. it broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane.
2. i couldn’t believe my eyes when i saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help.
3. i am crossing my fingers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.
【修辞手法】
比喻：”a little girl crying on the roof of her house“，以具象画面强化灾情冲击力，凸显无助与紧迫感
引用：”i am crossing my fingers for you“，化用英语习语，传递真挚祝愿
【文字校对】
• "e_tend"应为"extend"
• "america"应为"your hometown"或"the affected area"（语境中王志家乡在中国，范文误作america属地理事实错误）
【写作亮点】
✓ 称呼与落款格式规范，体现英文书信基本素养
✓ 情感层层递进，从震惊、共情到行动支持，逻辑自然流畅
✓ 细节描写生动，“crying on the roof”极具画面感和感染力
✓ 语言得体克制，慰问不失分寸，关切不越边界