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_iao ming had a dream(梦)last night
_iao ming had a dream last night. in the dream, he volunteered to serve(志愿列队) the beijing olympics.he tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries. when he found a foreign friend worried in the street, he went up to him and asked him what was the matter. the foreigner told _iao ming he was jack, and he forgot the way to the sun hotel. then _iao ming stopped a ta_i and took him to the sun hotel. _iao ming talked with jack on the way and made jack know more about beijing. jack thanked _iao ming very much and thought _iao ming’s english was very good. _iao ming was very happy.he smiled and smiled, then he woke up.
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梦里成志愿者
小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者：他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友……在交谈中, 小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明, 并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴, 他甜蜜地笑了……
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作文类型：记叙文、想象作文
【成语使用】
【形容词】
外国、不同、 worried、happy、sweet
【好词好句】
1. he tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries.
2. _iao ming talked with jack on the way and made jack know more about beijing.
3. jack thanked _iao ming very much and thought _iao ming’s english was very good.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "volunteered to serve(志愿列队)"应为"volunteered to serve"
• "ta_i"应为"taxi"
• "sun hotel"应为"sun hotel"
• "_iao ming"应为"xiao ming"
• "worried"在语境中宜改为"looking worried"或"seemed worried"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以梦境为线索，结构清晰，首尾圆合
✓ 选取奥运会志愿者这一真实而富有时代感的题材
✓ 通过具体行动（问路、打车、交谈）展现人物形象
✓ 中英双语意识自然融入叙事，体现语言学习情境