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高中英语作文：水资源
人们总以为淡水是取之不尽的，实际上淡水资源是很有限的。请谈谈你的看法。
it is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water. but to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.
as we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day. so enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population. whats more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water. though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used. only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings. so its high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource. stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.
with fresh water, the world will be prosperous.
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：议论文、环保类应用文
适合年级：高一、高二、高三
【成语使用】
取之不尽
【形容词】
有限的、迅速的、充足的、有毒的、有限的、繁荣的
【好词好句】
1. it is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.
2. but to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.
3. so it's high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.
【修辞手法】
比喻：将水资源比作生命存续的前提，“with fresh water, the world will be prosperous”暗含水为发展命脉的隐喻
【文字校对】
• "whats more"应为"what's more"
• "water resource"应为"water resources"
• "stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth."语序与逻辑衔接稍显生硬，建议调整为"stop polluting and save water; otherwise, we cannot survive on earth."
【写作亮点】
✓ 观点清晰，紧扣水资源稀缺与保护双重维度展开
✓ 中英双语结构自然，中文引题与英文主体形成有机呼应
✓ 用词准确，如“poisonous gases or wastes”“consequently results in”体现较强语言控制力
✓ 结尾句凝练有力，以条件句收束，增强警示效果