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高中暑假打算英语作文：暑假计划
the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. in the first few days i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. then i tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.
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作文类型：应用文、英语作文
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
intense、refreshing、senior、former、part-time
【好词好句】
1. the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation.
2. i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves.
3. to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.
【修辞手法】
排比：travel, work and study 构成并列结构，体现计划的多元性
【文字校对】
• "mount hua shan"应为"mount hua shan"
• "part time"应为"part-time"
• "former classmates(老同学)"中括号及中文注释不符合英文作文规范，应删去
【写作亮点】
✓ 主谓宾结构清晰，句式富有节奏感
✓ 动词短语精准有力，如"climb...to refresh"、"find...and conduct..."
✓ 逻辑衔接自然，用then、besides等过渡词体现时间与层次关系
✓ 主题聚焦明确，围绕"travel, work and study"三维展开
