✎作文范文
thanksgiving day is the usa and canadas holiday. later, people often thank the others on this day.
it’s in november of last thursday is thanksgiving day.
thanksgiving food
cornbread, english cheese pie, venison, ducks and geese, wild turkey, garlic and onions, pumpkin pudding are thanksgiving day’s food.
thanksgiving day a very traditional color of the food. every thanksgiving day, americans must eat a fat chicken. because turkey is the traditional course.
thanksgiving day blessings
thank the parents. they give me the life, let me to study.
thank the sisters and brothers. they let me healthy growth. in my difficult times, they stretched out their hands warm.
thank the teachers. you let me to study, let me have the ability to pay for someone else.
thank the friends. you bring me a lot of funny, bring me a lot of self-confidence. you bring me a lot of help, let me better to face all, too.
oh, thank you everyone!
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：节日介绍、感恩主题记叙文
适合年级：小学五年级、六年级、初中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
传统、温暖、健康、快乐、自信、丰盛
【好词好句】
1. “they stretched out their hands warm.”
2. “you bring me a lot of funny, bring me a lot of self-confidence.”
3. “thanksgiving day a very traditional color of the food.”
【修辞手法】
比喻：将感恩比作“伸出温暖的手”，体现亲情的可感可触
【文字校对】
• "thanksgiving day is the usa and canadas holiday"应为"thanksgiving day is a holiday in the usa and canada"
• "it’s in november of last thursday is thanksgiving day"应为"it falls on the fourth thursday of november"
• "a very traditional color of the food"应为"a holiday with very traditional foods"
• "fat chicken"应为"roast turkey"
• "let me to study"应为"help me study"
• "bring me a lot of funny"应为"bring me a lot of fun"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以食物、祝福两大板块清晰组织全文结构
✓ 感恩对象覆盖家庭、师长、朋友，层次分明
✓ 多次使用排比式短句增强情感节奏感
✓ 真挚朴素的情感表达贯穿始终