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i was so busy in the previous winter holiday for i am going to take the university entrance e_am in july this year. everyday, i buried myself in studying. i had to review each required subject and do lots of e_ercises. besides, because i did bad in mathematics and physics, i had to do much more e_ercises than other courses, which made me discouraged. i spent more than ten hours a day in studying. when i was tired, i watched tv or listened to music for a little while. but i was a big pity that i couldn go to the see cinema. in addition, i had to refuse all the invitations of friends and relatives. i only called them or sent messages in the new year’s eve. i desperately hoped that there is no e_am but i know it’s impossible. the only thing i can do is to study hard to get good scores and can be admitted to tsinghua university.
我是这么忙，在过去的寒假，我将参加今年七月的大学入学考试。每天，我埋头于学习。我得复习每一门必修课，做大量的练习。除此之外，由于我在数学和物理方面做得不好，所以我不得不做更多的练习，而不是其他的课程，这让我很沮丧。我花了十个多小时在学习上。当我累了，我看了电视或听音乐的一段时间。但我是一个很大的遗憾，我不能去看电影。此外，我还拒绝了朋友和亲戚的所有邀请。我只打电话或发短信在除夕。我希望没有考试，但我知道这是不可能的。我能做的就是努力学习，取得好成绩，并能考上清华大学。
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：记叙文、应用文
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
埋头苦干、事与愿违
【形容词】
忙碌、疲惫、沮丧、紧张、遗憾、迫切
【好词好句】
1. “我埋头于学习。”
2. “这让我很沮丧。”
3. “我能做的就是努力学习，取得好成绩，并能考上清华大学。”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "e_am"应为"exam"
• "i am going"应为"i am going"
• "i did bad"应为"i did poorly"
• "i can go"应为"i could go"
• "there is no e_am"应为"there were no exams"
【写作亮点】
✓ 真实呈现高三学子备考日常，细节饱满
✓ 中英双语对照自然，体现语言实践意识
✓ 情感脉络清晰，从忙碌到疲惫再到坚定，富有感染力
✓ 结尾聚焦理想院校，凸显目标感与青春志向