
✎作文范文
假定你是星光中学的李华。你觉得你市出租车行业问题较多,请根据以下提示给市长写一封信反映情况并提出自己的一些建议。
要点提示:
(1)停靠点太少,不易打车;
(2)欺诈外地乘客;
(3)车速过快,事故频频;
(4)深夜聚集在娱乐场所外等客时制造噪音,影响他人休息。
参考词汇:绕道:take a roundabout route 行业:trade 加强管理:tighten control over
注意:
1.词数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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dear mayor,
i’m a resident of the city. i feel there are many problems e_isting in the trade of ta_i in our city. first of all, there are still not enough stops in the streets so it’s not easy to take a ta_i. and ta_is often run very fast, which causes many traffic accidents. another terrible thing which often happens is that deep at night ta_is waiting around the entertainment places make much noise. many people suffer from this inconsiderate 高二英语作文 给市长写一封信反映你市出租车行业问题及建议action. a friend of mine living in another city once visited me, and she told me our citys ta_i drivers cheated her by taking a roundabout route. what will a guest think of our city after such a bad e_perience?
i think its high time to take actions to tighted control over the ta_i trade. maybe the first thing to do is to raise the ta_i drivers professional morality.
sincerely yours
li hua
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作文类型:应用文、书信、议论文
适合年级:高一、高二、高三
【成语使用】
【形容词】
terrible、deep、inconsiderate、bad、many、high
【好词好句】
1. what will a guest think of our city after such a bad experience?
2. it’s high time to take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade.
3. many people suffer from this inconsiderate action.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "e_isting"应为"existing"
• "ta_i"应为"taxi"
• "citys"应为"city’s"
• "e_perience"应为"experience"
• "tighted"应为"tighten"
• "professional morality"宜改为"professional ethics"更准确
【写作亮点】
✓ 问题归纳清晰,四点并列有层次
✓ 以朋友真实经历增强说服力与现场感
✓ 结尾呼吁及时治理,体现公民责任意识
✓ 语言简洁,基本符合100词左右的篇幅要求