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people judge whether a person is smart by the iq. indeed, iq can make people more outstanding, while eq also plays the important role in helping people be favored by others. in my opinion, eq is more needed by people. today, the world gets globalized. it is impossible to live alone and make no connection with others. good eq can make us get along with others and create more chances to be successful. we can find that the successful people always have high eq. they handle all kinds of relationship so well and everybody is willing to support them. so eq helps people to feel happy.
人们会通过智商来判断一个人是否聪明。
事实上，智商在可以让人变得更优秀，而情商在让人们受欢迎中扮演着重要的角色。在我看来，人们更需要高情商。在全球化的今天，人们是不可能独自生活，不与他人交往。高情商可以使我们与他人相处融洽，创造更多成功的机会。我们可以发现，成功的人总是有着高情商，他们善于处理各种各样的关系，让大家都愿意支持他们。所以高情商能让人们感到快乐。
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：议论文、双语作文
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
融洽相处、各种各样、独自生活
【形容词】
聪明、优秀、重要、成功、高、快乐、全球化的、融洽
【好词好句】
1. “今天，世界变得全球化。它不可能独自生活，不与他人交往。”
2. “成功的人总是有着高情商，他们善于处理各种各样的关系，让大家都愿意支持他们。”
3. “高情商可以使我们与他人相处融洽，创造更多成功的机会。”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "it is impossible to live alone and make no connection with others"应为"it is impossible to live alone without connecting with others"
• "indeed, iq can make people more outstanding, while eq also plays the important role"应为"indeed, iq can help people become more outstanding, while eq also plays an important role"
• "the successful people always have high eq"应为"successful people always have high eq"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语对照结构清晰，便于理解核心观点
✓ 观点明确，以“eq more needed”为论点贯穿始终
✓ 逻辑递进自然：从现象（iq判断聪明）到对比（iq vs eq），再到现实依据（全球化）、例证（成功者共性）与结论（eq促快乐）
✓ 中文段落用词准确，句式简洁有力，如“让大家都愿意支持他们”富有感染力