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march 6th, 2026
dear mr li,
李老师：
i’m sorry to tell you that i have to ask for sick leave for the whole afternoon class. because i have a heavy headache now and feel very sick. i think i have to ask for sick leave to go to hospital for medicine. i will attend the ne_t day classes on time.
我很抱歉地告诉你，我想请一整个下午的病假。因为我现在头很疼而且感觉很难受。我觉得我必须得请假去医院看医生。我会准时参加明天的课。
yours repectful,
tim
蒂姆
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作文类型：应用文、书信
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
heavy、sick、very、whole、ne_t
【好词好句】
1. “i’m sorry to tell you that i have to ask for sick leave for the whole afternoon class.”
2. “because i have a heavy headache now and feel very sick.”
3. “i will attend the next day classes on time.”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "repectful"应为"respectful"
• "ne_t"应为"next"
• "i’m sorry to tell you that i have to ask for sick leave..."中首字母i未大写，应为"i"
• "because i have..."中首字母i未大写，应为"because i"
• "i think i have to ask..."中三处i均未大写，应为"i"
• "yours repectful,"中repectful拼写错误且格式不规范，应为"yours respectfully,"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语对照结构清晰，便于理解请假事由与表达礼仪
✓ 语言简洁直接，符合病假条的实际交际功能需求
✓ 英文部分基本语法框架完整，主谓一致与时态使用较准确
✓ 情感表达得体，歉意与承诺并存，体现基本书面礼仪意识