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how are you?now i am faced to some problems and i think your advice is worthy to be adopted.would you mind giving them to me?
the trouble is that i need to consider how to change thewhich i have a duty on it and make it better.so i want to ask you to guide me to finish this work.the first problem is how to design th first page of the newspaper.its so important that i must design it patiently.
second,what to write inside the newspaper?how to attract readers?i think i should add something interesting into the newspaper,should i?
last but not least,i need to add some new programs.please tell me what should i do?
ill appreciate it if you reply me quickly.best wishes to you!
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作文类型：书信、应用文
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【文字校对】
• "faced to"应为"faced with"
• "thewhich"应为"the work which"
• "th first page"应为"the first page"
• "its so important"应为"it's so important"
• "ill appreciate"应为"i'll appreciate"
【写作亮点】
✓ 书信格式基本完整，具备称呼、正文、结尾祝福语等要素
✓ 问题意识清晰，能围绕报纸制作提出三个具体层面的困惑
✓ 语言表达有礼貌得体，体现对收信人的尊重与期待
✓ 句式有一定变化，使用了疑问句、感叹句和条件句增强交流感