✎作文范文
假如你的新笔友叫mike。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的情况。
信的内容必须包括：你的姓名，年龄，所就读的学校，年级、班级，爱好，最喜欢的学科及理由，最喜欢的影片及理由等。
信的内容不得少于十句话。信的开头和结尾已给出。
january 12 th,.2026
dear mike,
thanks for your letter. now i’d like to tell you something about myself._______
yours, bob
january 12 th,2026
thanks for your letter, now i’d like to tell you something about myself.
my name is _ _. i’m twelve. i study at ___ middle school, i’m in class four grade two. my favorite subject is science and i also like english. because they are very important and useful. i like playing the violin .i like action movies .because they are e_citing .what about you? do you like them?
please write to tell me soon.
yours
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：应用文、书信
适合年级：小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
important、useful、exciting、favorite、twelve
【好词好句】
1. thanks for your letter. now i’d like to tell you something about myself.
2. my favorite subject is science and i also like english.
3. because they are very important and useful.
4. i like action movies because they are exciting.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "january 12 th,.2026"应为"january 12th, 2026"
• "january 12 th,2026"应为"january 12th, 2026"
• "e_citing"应为"exciting"
• "class four grade two"应为"class four, grade two"
• "thanks for your letter, now i’d like to tell you something about myself."应为"thanks for your letter. now i’d like to tell you something about myself."
【写作亮点】
✓ 格式基本符合英文书信规范，包含日期、称呼、正文、结尾敬语和署名
✓ 内容覆盖题目要求的全部要点，信息完整
✓ 语言简洁明了，符合初学者表达习惯
✓ 能运用简单连词（and、because）组织句子，体现基本逻辑关系