多么快乐的一天

250字
主题:童年欢乐、日常美好、同伴交往、自然体验

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what a happy day

多么快乐的一天

today im very happy,after i have breakfast,i go to park.

its a sunny day ,the bird is singing,im singing too.when i get to park,i see some girls are playing games ,so i join them.we play very happy.then i have lunch with my friends.we both have a good time.what a happy day!

今天我很高兴,毕竟我吃早餐,我去公园。

这是一个阳光灿烂的日子,小鸟在歌唱,我也唱歌.当我去公园的时候,我看到一些女孩在玩游戏,所以我加入他们.我们玩的很开心.接着我一起吃午饭我和我的朋友.我们两个有一个很好的时间.多么快乐的一天!

精选读者点评

标点乱跑,句号都飘到段首去了!“我吃早餐,我去公园”,这哪是中文?像机器人念说明书。把“after i have breakfast”直接塞进来,读者得帮你翻译一遍才懂。再读三遍,自己改标点、顺句子。

我的背包my backpack

200字
主题:亲情、成长、陪伴、童心、日常物语、感恩

i have a backpack. it is large and it is blue. it is a birthday gift from my parents. i love it very much. it is very hard-working, because i keep all my school things in it. it is very heavy. it is with all the time during school days. it is a good friend of mine.

我有一个背包。它是大的,它是蓝色的。这是我父母送给我的生日礼物。我非常喜欢它。这是非常勤劳,因为我把所有的学校的事情在它。这是非常沉重的。这是在学校的日子里,所有的时间。它是我的好朋友。

精选读者点评

这个“它很勤劳”的拟人真鲜活!把背包当伙伴写,比光说“我喜欢”有意思多了。但“学校的事情在它”这句中文有点卡,试试“我把课本、作业本、水壶全塞给它”?画面立马活了。

经典二年级英语作文-when i was needed

250字
主题:家庭责任、代际互动、情感表达、自我价值、日常温情

i am the only child in my family, so my parents give me all the things. i am so gratitude, but i want to do something for them, i want to feel that i can be helpful. so i ask my parents what i can do for them, they are so happy. my mother asks me to help her with the housework and my father asks me to watch the football game with him.

我是家中的孩子,因此父母给予了我一切东西。我很感激,但是我想为他们做点事情,我想要感到自己也能帮上忙。因此我问父母我能为他们做什么,他们很高兴。妈妈叫我帮忙做家务,爸爸叫我和他一起看足球比赛。

精选读者点评

哎哟,中英文混搭得挺自然嘛!“i am so gratitude”这句小错误老师圈出来了,gratitude是名词,想说“我很感激”得用i am so grateful哦~