金龙泉桥

500字
主题:城市风貌、公共设施、地域文化、生活便利、环境美化

在荆门市中天街和象山大道交叉的地方,矗立着一座天桥。它是由金龙泉集团公司捐资修建的,因此叫金龙泉桥。

站在远处向天桥望去,桥下面有八根巨大的钢筋混凝柱,稳稳地托住桥身,要三四个人才合抱的过来。中间是环形的,四周分支着八条小腿,像只巨大的螃蟹连接着象山大道和中天街,使它们更成为一个整体。桥的四周都刻着“金龙泉桥”的烫金大字。在这桥的下面各有一个红绿灯,它们像三只眼睛监视着行人车辆按交通规则行驶。顺着天桥往上走,你就会发现天桥两旁都是用银白色的不锈钢做成的栏杆,两旁是行人行走的踏步台阶,中间是刻着精美图案的滑坡,有龙、鸟等一些动物。旁边耸立着一对对玉兰灯柱,真像检阅的队伍。走上桥面,你会大吃一惊,桥面四个方向分别雕刻着雄伟壮丽的东山宝塔,荆门的象征——荆门市标,风景秀丽的文明湖,藏金纳宝的岚光阁。图案中间都用箭头标示着行人走的方向。

有了这座桥,在这繁华的路段再也没有发生交通拥挤的现象了。行人过马路走天桥,保证了行人的安全。在夏天,它也给人们提供了娱乐的场所。人们经常站在桥上观看荆门的美景,有的还在桥上乘乘凉,下下棋。这座天桥,既给人们带来了方便,又美化了荆门的环境

精选读者点评

这个“螃蟹桥”的比喻真贴切!八条腿撑着桥身,一下子就把钢筋水泥写出了生气。可是“三只眼睛”说红绿灯,稍有点怪,绿灯亮时,总不能算“睁眼”吧哦!

参观重庆长江大桥

350字
主题:自然与人工之美、城市地标、观察体验、壮美山河

雨过天睛,爸爸带着我来到重庆长江大桥。雨水冲干净了一切,刚“洗完澡”的长江大桥显得十分壮丽。波浪滚滚的江水中,7个巨大的桥墩稳稳地托住桥身,仿佛一条钢铁巨龙卧在大江上面。桥面上是公路,一辆辆大小不同的汽车繁忙地行驶着,公路的左右两边是人行道。大桥上的行人车辆穿梭似的来来往往。

我在爸爸的带领之下,来到了正桥。几组漂亮的花坛左右摆放,里边开满了许许多多五颜六色的花朵。桥头有四个塑像,各是春、夏、秋、冬四个季节的人物塑像。北桥头的左右两边都有叶剑英的题词,大理石墙面刻着“重庆长江大桥”六个金色的大字。直直的公路上,一对对玉兰花灯柱站得整整齐齐,像等候检阅的队伍一样。在大桥上远望江面,江上的轮船像一叶叶扁舟。

参观完这座桥,我情不自禁地说:“这座桥真是雄伟壮丽!”

精选读者点评

雨过天晴的“睛”写错了,是“晴”哦!还有“波浪滚滚的江水”,长江在桥下其实挺平缓的,换个词更准。

五一劳动节作文

450字
主题:节日欢愉、家乡美景、文化传承、自然和谐

labor day on this day, mom and dad to visit me and beautiful along the river road.

lantern when the first two days, a stroll along the river road in, so you a panoramic view across the river yuzhou yuan bridge, he, like the horizon of the rainbow, bridging the north-south traffic, beautiful he yuan river winding like a ribbon flowing through here, cross-strait beautiful, rippling blue river, from all the people gathered here his list.

_ing i step quickly to the triassic park, where it is the light of the oceans, the world of light, only to stand quietly around the two rows of tall, tall and straight forward to the magnolia lamp post, which is far longer looked like a fire dragon lying. in the river, but also seems to be embedded in the water park yuan neck a pearl necklace, more like a neat row of sentries, guarding the water park yuan harmony and perfection.

yuan in the middle of the water park, where the chinese history and culture to display the statue of famous people, and confucius, wang, li bai ......their heads and some idle, some silent with respect.

yuan look around the water park, willow snakes, breeze blowing gently, andi, i can not help but stand in admiration, yuan is the most beautiful water park, people went to the door, just like entering paradise.

this had a very happy 51.

精选读者点评

“yuzhou yuan bridge,he”这句笔力饱满!桥像彩虹横跨两岸,画面一下就表达鲜明,略显“he”是不是该统一成“it”?还有“triassic park”怕是手误?记得查查地名哈~