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my dream
everyone has his dream. my dream is to be a famous journalist in the future. when i grow up, im going to be a journalist. ne_t year, im going to write articles for magazines and newspapers. im going to a university in beijing after senior school. maybe im going to find a part-time job and save some money. ne_t, im going to work for a tv station as a journalist. then im going to travel all over the world. what is your dream in the future? would you like to tell me ?
翻译：
人人都有梦想。我的梦想是在将来做一名的记者。当我长大的时候，我将做一个记者。明年，我将给杂志和报纸写一些文章。中学毕业后，我将去北京的某所大学上学。或许我将找一份兼职工作来积攒些钱。下一步，我将作为记者为电视台工作。然后我将周游世界各地。你将来的梦想是什么？你愿意告诉我吗？
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：英语习作、梦想类记叙文、书信体
适合年级：初中一年级、初中二年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
famous、part-time、future、next、senior
【好词好句】
1. everyone has his dream.
2. i’m going to write articles for magazines and newspapers.
3. then i’m going to travel all over the world.
【修辞手法】
排比：连用多个“i’m going to…”句式，形成节奏鲜明的行动序列，增强憧憬感与决心感
【文字校对】
• "ne_t"应为"next"
• "im"应为"i'm"
• "a famous journalist in the future"中"the future"前宜用"the"，但"my dream is to be a famous journalist"更自然，原句略显冗余
【写作亮点】
✓ 主题清晰，以“梦想”为线索贯穿始终，结构完整
✓ 时态运用基本准确，以be going to表将来意图，体现语言意识
✓ 中英对照呈现，便于理解与互文参照
✓ 句式富有变化，穿插疑问句收尾，增强互动性与亲切感
