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a traditional festival of china
mid autumn festival is a traditional festival of china。 it used to be as important as spring festival 。it is usually celebrated in september or october。 this festival is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moon light。 to some e_tent， it is like thanks giving day in western countries。 on this day， people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal。 after that， people always eat delicious moon cakes， and watch the moon。 the moon is always very round on that day， and makes people think of their relatives and friends。 it is a day of pleasure and happiness。 hope you have a wonderful mid autumn festival!
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作文类型：说明文、英语作文
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
traditional、important、beautiful、delicious、round、wonderful
【好词好句】
1. mid-autumn festival is a traditional festival of china.
2. the moon is always very round on that day, and makes people think of their relatives and friends.
3. it is a day of pleasure and happiness.
4. to some extent, it is like thanksgiving day in western countries.
【修辞手法】
比喻：the moon is always very round on that day, and makes people think of their relatives and friends，以圆月喻团圆，含蓄传递思念之情
【文字校对】
• "e_tent"应为"extent"
• "mid autumn festival"应为"mid-autumn festival"
• "spring festival"应为"spring festival"
• "moon cakes"应为"mooncakes"
• "thanks giving day"应为"thanksgiving day"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语标题自然呼应，体现文化对比意识
✓ 时间、习俗、情感三层递进，结构清晰
✓ “round moon”与“think of relatives and friends”形成意象关联，富有诗意
✓ 中西节日类比恰当，拓展文化视野
